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Some believe Technology made our life too complex and solution is to lead a simple life without Technology what extent do you agree or disagree?

Some believe Technology made our life too complex and solution is to lead a simple life without Technology what extent D0rA
In this contemporary modern gauges has become lamput and its play a crucial role in framing the developmental blueprint of nation where few folks ponder that electronic gadgets made our life to laborious and the solution is that keep restriction on technology to make your life easier Iam in consummate discord with this notion and will explicate my view point in upcoming paragraph. The predominant justification to support my inclination is that the without Technology we cannot do tremendous work and in a shorter period of time. In other words, to build any building it want modern gadgets to complete in accurate way as well as in given period of time. moreover, without aid of Technology a person cannot enjoy the luxurious lifestyle and sedentary life because all the time they should consume on particular work. For instance, according to Times of India, a company determine in in AGM - Annual General Meeting that one month we do our work without assist of the technology and the result is that the company suffer from abundant modulating. Thus, it cannot get use time while working by own and a waste of time. Furthermore, there is one prominent reason for not eradicate the technology and is that the bank work has become easiest than past. To explicate, in bygone days individual used to stand on queue for hours but in this present scenario, within one click the financial income can transfer from one account to another account without any conflict and no risk so, in this way Technology ought to not eliminate in this globe. For instance, in New Zealand, in 2008, regulatory bodies decided that Technology should prohibited, in 2010, administrative had been declared that technology is Paramount because that citizens as well as Government have been fed up to work without Technology. In conclusion, although using more and more Technology can adversely affect in human life, without it can also make a life adversity owning to do any work is not possible without modern gadgets.
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and its play a crucial role in framing the developmental blueprint of nation where few folks ponder that electronic gadgets made our
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life
to laborious and the solution is that
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keep
restriction on
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technology
to
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make
your
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life
easier
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Iam
in consummate discord with this notion and will explicate my view point in upcoming paragraph.

The predominant justification to support my inclination is that the without
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Technology
we cannot do tremendous
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work
and in a shorter period of
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time
.
In other words
, to build any building it want modern gadgets to complete in accurate way
as well
as in
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given
period of
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time
.
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moreover
, without aid of
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Technology
a person cannot enjoy the luxurious lifestyle and sedentary
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life
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because
all the
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time
they should consume on particular
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work
.
For instance
, according to
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Times
of India, a
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company
determine
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in in
AGM
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-
Annual General Meeting that one month we do our
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work
without assist of the
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technology
and the result is that the
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company
suffer from abundant modulating.
Thus
, it cannot
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get
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use
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time
while working by
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own
and a waste of time.

Furthermore
, there is one prominent reason for not eradicate the
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technology
and is that the bank
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work
has become
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easiest
than past. To explicate, in bygone days individual
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used
to stand on queue for hours
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but
in this present scenario, within one click the financial income can transfer from one account to another account without any conflict and no
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risk
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so
, in this way
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Technology
ought to not eliminate in this globe.
For instance
, in New Zealand, in 2008, regulatory bodies decided that
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Technology
should
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prohibited
, in 2010, administrative had
been declared
that
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technology
is Paramount
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because
that citizens
as well
as
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Government
have
been fed
up to
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work
without Technology.

In conclusion
, although using more and more
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Technology
can
adversely
affect in human
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life
, without it can
also
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make
a
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life
adversity owning to do any
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work
is not possible without modern gadgets.
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IELTS essay Some believe Technology made our life too complex and solution is to lead a simple life without Technology what extent

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4 paragraphs
335 words
6.0
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