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some argue that he quality of product is what matters while others suggest that products should be affordable. discuss both views and give your opinion

some argue that he quality of product is what matters while others suggest that products should be affordable. discuss both views and give your opinion kYxVn
Opinion is divided among consumers where quality of products is concerned. While some argue that it is the quality of products that is important hence utilising best quality raw material in manufacturing those products, I argue that it is important to have products that are inexpensive and affordable which, in my opinion, would outweigh the benefits of having premium products. However, there are considerable benefits associated with products that are durable which will also be explained in this essay. Firstly, as mentioned above it is mainly the price of the raw material that determines the price of a certain product. Even though this harms the quality of the product which subsequently affects its durability, there Is a major benefit that needs to be highlighted, which is, accessibility. Comparison of Apple and sony is an instance where the introduction of a competing brand that launched a product with similar features that is inexpensive and is available for an affordable price point. Secondly the benefits of products that are expensive such as the features and durability, and utilisation of premium material will allow consumers to use it for an extended period as compared to competing brands which reduces wastage. An excellent illustration of this is the vacuum cleaner brands Dyson and Phillips, where most consumers hesitate to invest a sum of money on a vacuum but on the flip side this could be a good investment with convenient features but unfortunately for a target consumer base. In conclusion, by considering the requirements of the consumers it is crucial that products are manufactured at affordable prices which can increase accessibility and encourage everyone to able to enjoy benefits of any product.
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among
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consumers
where
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quality
of
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products
is concerned
. While
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some
argue that it is the
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quality
of
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products
that is
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important
hence
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utilising best
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quality
raw material in manufacturing those
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products
, I argue that it is
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important
to have
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products
that are inexpensive and affordable which, in my opinion, would outweigh the
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benefits
of having premium
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products
.
However
, there are considerable
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benefits
associated with
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products
that are durable which will
also
be
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explained
in this essay.

Firstly
, as mentioned above it is
mainly
the
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price
of the raw material that determines the
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price
of a certain
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product
.
Even though
this harms the
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quality
of the
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product
which
subsequently
affects its durability, there Is a major
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benefit
that needs to
be highlighted
, which is, accessibility. Comparison of Apple and
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sony
is an instance where the introduction of a competing brand that launched a
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product
with similar features
that is
inexpensive and is available for an affordable
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price
point.

Secondly
the
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benefits
of
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products
that are expensive such as the features and durability, and
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utilisation
of premium material will
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allow
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consumers
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use
it for an extended period as compared to competing brands which
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reduces
wastage. An excellent illustration of this is the vacuum cleaner brands Dyson and Phillips, where most
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consumers
hesitate to invest a sum of money on a vacuum
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but
on the flip side this could be a
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good
investment with convenient features
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but
unfortunately for a target
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consumer
base.

In conclusion
, by considering the requirements of the
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consumers
it is crucial that
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products
are manufactured
at affordable
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prices
which can increase accessibility and encourage everyone
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to able
to enjoy
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benefits
of any
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product
.
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IELTS essay some argue that he quality of product is what matters while others suggest that products should be affordable. discuss both views and give your opinion

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
278 words
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