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Solving environmental problems should be the responsibility of an international organization rather than each national government. Do you agree or disagree?

Solving environmental problems should be the responsibility of an international organization rather than each national government. XMBY
Every individual wants to live in a clean habitat. Governments and global environment organizations should take responsibility for protecting the earth as well as each individual needing to take responsibility for the universe. This essay will explain that every resident and authorities are able to do something for our planet. On top of that, there are numerous environmental issues happening on a global scale such as climate change and animal extinction due to loss of habitat. cities and communities have to save our planet’s natural resources and keep the environment clean for a growing population. The global population increases rapidly every year so there are lots of requirements to tackle global warming. Therefore, governments which provide some measures for reducing air pollution and water pollution achieve healthy life for their citizens. Authorities should budget to protect woods, lakes and other water resources. Also, mayors need to support citizens to recycle. If they put some differentiated bins on every corner of the street, people may throw their waste more consciously. On the other hand, every human has to be responsible for protecting our environment from pollution or preserving extinct animals. For example, the World wildlife and nature fund which is one of the most popular international organizations, has struggled to solve problems all around the world. Volunteers could work with one of the international facilities. However, planting trees in the neighbourhood is one of the best things you can do readily for the local environment. Hence, every citizen has to be sensitive to the fact that there is pollution in our rivers, oceans, public spaces and countryside. At least, as sensitive individuals, we need to avoid using plastic bags and be sustainable by recycling our waste whenever possible. Therefore, preserving natural life is the collective responsibility of every human whether they participate in the international organization or an independent person. It is time to become conscientious individuals to recycle, reuse and reduce waste wherever possible.
Every
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individual
wants to
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live
in a clean habitat.
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Governments
and
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global
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environment
organizations should take responsibility for protecting the earth
as well
as each
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individual
needing to take responsibility for the universe. This essay will
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explain
that every resident and authorities are able to do something for our planet.

On top of that
, there are numerous environmental issues happening on a
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global
scale such as climate
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change
and animal extinction due to loss of habitat.
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cities
and communities
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have to
save our planet’s natural resources and
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keep
the
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environment
clean for a growing population. The
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global
population increases
rapidly
every year
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so
there are lots of requirements to tackle
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global
warming.
Therefore
,
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governments
which provide
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some
measures for reducing air
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pollution
and water
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pollution
achieve healthy life for their citizens. Authorities should budget to protect woods, lakes and other water resources.
Also
, mayors need to support citizens to recycle. If they put
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
some
differentiated bins on every corner of the street,
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
people
may throw their waste more
consciously
.

On the other hand
, every human
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has to
be responsible for protecting our
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
environment
from
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pollution
or preserving extinct animals.
For example
, the World wildlife and nature fund which is one of the most popular international organizations, has struggled to solve problems all around the world. Volunteers could work with one of the international facilities.
However
, planting trees in the
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neighbourhood
is one of the best things you can do
readily
for the local
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environment
.
Hence
, every citizen
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has to
be sensitive to the fact that there is
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pollution
in our rivers, oceans, public spaces and countryside. At least, as sensitive
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individuals
, we need to avoid using plastic bags and be sustainable by recycling our waste whenever possible.

Therefore
, preserving natural life is the collective responsibility of every human whether they participate in the international organization or an independent person. It is time to become conscientious
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
individuals
to recycle, reuse and
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
reduce
waste wherever possible.

IELTS essay Solving environmental problems should be the responsibility of an international organization rather than each national government.

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
324 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0
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