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solution for balance between work and other part of lives

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There are many solutions for people when failing to achieve an ideal work-life balance. First of all, people need to create a personal timetable which balances work activities and entertainment activities. By doing so, people will work efficiently and have time to do enjoy pastimes such as family activities and refresh themselves. Furthermore, the management board should adopt a strict “No Work at Home” policy for employees. When people come home from work, they must learn to switch the office button off. This way helps the human body receive the resting amount needed, and they will avoid stress-related illnesses.

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