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Solar energy becoming more and more popular in many countries ? Whatbare merits and demerits

Solar energy becoming more and more popular in many countries? Whatbare merits and demerits q12j5
Energy is required for accomplishing a myraid of tasks in the home. To carry out these activities, people claim that solar energy plays an essential role for household purpose in various forms across the world. This essay will analysis pros and cons of solar resources. First and foremost, The positive aspects on solar energy which are consumed by people. The evidence provided by the huge amount of energy used by generaters for maintaining their electricity. To be more precise electri meters charged at high rate to coverup people install solarpanels to store vitality for supplying current. Besides fossil fuel are very dangerous for atmosphere. On the other hand the waves and panels should be original On the contrary, The negative impact on utilizing intent on Sun power. A good illustration for this unavailable Of sun under some of the circumstances their won't get this opportunity to have spirit. What it mean few of the countries they usually have a cool weather their hardly get summer season. Similarly it also depend on climate condition Henceforth, I partially agree where consumping solar energy is quite cheaper than electri bills. In fact it effect on fossil fuels which are harmfull for individual
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claim that
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energy
plays an essential role for household purpose in various forms across the world. This essay will analysis pros and cons of
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resources.

First
and foremost, The
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aspects on
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energy
which
are consumed
by
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people
. The evidence provided by the huge amount of
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energy
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generaters
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coverup
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people
install
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solarpanels
to store vitality for supplying
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current
.
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fossil fuel are
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dangerous
for atmosphere.
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original


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, The
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impact on utilizing intent on Sun power. A
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illustration for this unavailable Of sun under
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some of the
circumstances their won't
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this opportunity to have spirit. What it
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usually
have a cool weather their hardly
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get
summer season.
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Similarly
it
also
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depend
on climate condition

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partially
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agree
where
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consumping
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solar
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energy
is quite cheaper than
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electri
bills. In
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effect
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harmfull
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individual
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IELTS essay Solar energy becoming more and more popular in many countries? Whatbare merits and demerits

Essay
  American English
3 paragraphs
198 words
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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