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Society is changing very very fast

Society is changing very very fast 569RD
Society is moving towards a change at a rapidly increasing rate in this present day age. This speed of change is believed to be creating a direct impact on our mental as well as physical health in our life. This essay will argue that the change we are experiencing in our life is an effect of the continuous evolution of the society in the race towards becoming better than before. Society abides by the rules of nature and law and that is- change with its uninterrupted pace to be superior than before. It is justifiable as the survival of the fittest is the need of the hour. For instance, an employee working in a company is unable to cope up with working overnight paid hours with his rest of the team who are not just ready but are pretty much excited to work and acquire new skills and abilities, then it is a matter of concern for that person as he/she will be left behind in the race of progression. This instance depicts a clear picture of how moving fast with society plays an important role in keeping up with it. Despite the professional satisfaction associated with changing rapidly, the idea that it brings any other kind of satisfaction is false. This fast evolution has become a necessary evil for this modern age. It is hampering the mental and physical well-being of people. Some statistics have even shown that the percentage of people getting ill or sick due to workload pressure and continuous changes has markedly increased from 5% in 1995 to 50% in 2020. Overall the idea of moving super-fast can potentially be good but until and unless everyone involved gets a fair chance to keep up with this pace instead of just joining this marathon. This essay argued that some people believe that changing fast with society is necessary but instead it is a process that needs to be inculcated with one's own speed, keeping up in mind all the aspects and impacts it can create.
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Society
is moving towards a
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change
at a
rapidly
increasing rate in this present day age. This speed of
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
change
is believed
to be creating a direct impact on our mental
as well
as physical health in our life. This essay will argue that the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
change
we are experiencing in our life is an effect of the continuous evolution of the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
society
in the race towards becoming better than
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before
.

Society abides by the
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rules
of nature and law and
that is
-
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change
with its uninterrupted pace to be
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superior than
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before
. It is justifiable as the survival of the fittest is the need of the hour.
For instance
, an employee working in a
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company
is unable to cope up with working overnight paid hours with his rest of the team who are not
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just
ready
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but
are pretty much excited to work and acquire new
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skills
and abilities, then it is a matter of concern for that person as he/she will be
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left
behind in the race of progression. This instance depicts a
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clear
picture of how moving
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fast
with
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society
plays an
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important
role in keeping up with it.

Despite the professional satisfaction associated with changing
rapidly
, the
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
idea
that it brings any other kind of satisfaction is false. This
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
fast
evolution has become a necessary evil for this modern age. It is hampering the mental and physical well-being of
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
people
.
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
Some
statistics have even shown that the percentage of
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
people
getting ill or sick due to workload pressure and continuous
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changes
has
markedly
increased from 5% in 1995 to 50% in 2020.
Overall
the
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idea
of moving super-
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fast
can
potentially
be
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good
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but
until and unless everyone involved
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gets
a
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fair
chance to
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keep
up with this pace
instead
of
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just
joining this marathon.

This essay argued that
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some
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people
believe that changing
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fast
with
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society
is necessary
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but
instead
it is a process that needs to
be inculcated
with one's
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
own
speed, keeping up in mind all the aspects and impacts it can create.
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IELTS essay Society is changing very very fast

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
338 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 7.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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