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many believes that companies behind oil and gas production promote new boundless opportunities, while others fear the results from their intrusion in nature . Discuss possible reasons, results and solutions.

many believes that companies behind oil and gas production promote new boundless opportunities, while others fear the results from their intrusion in nature. Discuss possible reasons, results and solutions. BJoDw
It cannot be denied that, oil and gas are most necessary elements, that not only helps to increasing people’s quality of life, but also beneficial for our country’s economic growth. Although, some firmly believe that, industry create new opportunities for everyone through producing oil and gas; while, a few other considered that, usage of natural resources makes adverse impacts on environment. Therefore, both the views will be critiqued, before reaching to a decision. To begin with, we must admit that, due to oil and gas, humans might be more able to tackle their problems very smoothly in their exhausted life and do all primary activities as per their convenience; such as, natural resources allows people for heating of homes, running of cars and plans, and the production of goods. As a result, society improve their standard of living, particularly in developing country. Moreover, owing to manufacture, gas companies offers jobs for the different stages, which plays a crucial role to reducing scarcity unemployment and helps to enhance nation’s finance. Nevertheless, it is a fact that, in search of crude oil, researcher drill many breathe taking landscape and due to which, they drilled the area, they harm the habitat and also disastrous to the environment. Additionally, it is evident that, usage of fuel in wide range is notonly creating health issues but also generating global warming. For example, nowadays, citizens mostly prefer to travel by vehicles, in which carbon dioxide getting released in the atmosphere, it is may be endangering our existence, that’s why, it is necessary that, public should be aiming to utilise more eco- friendly options. To concluse, there is advantage to finding new places to get oil and gas, which helps to sustain and living standards, but oil and gas also damage our environment, planet and health. Thus, i think, we should aiming to used eco-friendly sources rather than oil and gas.
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be denied
that,
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and
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are
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most
necessary elements, that not
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only
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helps
to increasing
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people
’s quality of life,
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but
also
beneficial for our country’s economic growth. Although,
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some
firmly
believe that, industry create new opportunities for everyone through producing
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oil
and
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gas
; while, a few other considered that, usage of natural resources
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makes
adverse impacts on environment.
Therefore
, both the views will
be critiqued
,
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before
reaching to a decision.

To
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begin
with, we
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must
admit that, due to
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oil
and
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gas
, humans might be more able to tackle their problems
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very
smoothly
in their exhausted life and do all primary activities as per their convenience; such as, natural resources
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allows
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people
for heating of homes, running of cars and plans, and the production of
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goods
.
As a result
, society
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improve
their standard of living,
particularly
in
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developing country
.
Moreover
, owing to manufacture,
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gas
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companies
offers jobs for the
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different
stages, which plays a crucial role to reducing scarcity unemployment and
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helps
to enhance nation’s finance.

Nevertheless
, it is a fact that, in search of crude
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oil
, researcher drill
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many
breathe taking landscape and due to which, they drilled the area, they harm the habitat and
also
disastrous to the environment.
Additionally
, it is evident that, usage of fuel in wide range is
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notonly
creating health issues
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but
also
generating global warming.
For example
, nowadays, citizens
mostly
prefer to travel by vehicles, in which carbon dioxide getting released in the atmosphere, it is may be endangering our existence, that’s why, it is necessary that, public should be aiming to
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utilise
more
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eco
- friendly options.

To
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concluse
, there is advantage to finding new places to
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get
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oil
and
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gas
, which
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helps
to sustain and living standards,
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but
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oil
and
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gas
also
damage our environment, planet and health.
Thus
,
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i
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think
, we should
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aiming
to
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used
eco-friendly sources
rather
than
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oil
and
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gas
.
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IELTS essay many believes that companies behind oil and gas production promote new boundless opportunities, while others fear the results from their intrusion in nature. Discuss possible reasons, results and solutions.

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