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You should spend about 40 minutes on this task. Society is based on rules and laws. If individuals were free to do whatever they want to do, it could not function. To what extent do you agree or disagree with the above statement? You should write at least 250 words.

The people’s behavioural patterns are dependent directly on the law and order introduced by the human, to the human. If there is no such regulations, it could mislead the entire humankind on the negative prospect of life that eventually results in increased number of crimes and misuse of natural resources. After all, the humankind is just a social animal that hunts the natural resources like forest, for the sake of their own prosperity. It is the propaganda of the Government that plays a major role to look after this issue. The competitiveness among the people, to live a luxurious life lead them to disturb the natural habitat. For instance, if there is no law, then the business people would have destroyed the entire plants for the manufacturing of paper, furniture, etc. It is the policy of the Government that had helped to save the planet Earth from such activities. In addition, the crime number would increase drastically as a result of people’s independency on decision making during the venture of life. The rage of balancing the pace with others in the society makes the individual to fail the sense of analysing their own actions. Imprisonment and punishment are the consequences of the wrong doings, for example, the people committing murder out of anger are brought under the jurisdiction to prevail the justice for the lost life. This indicates the importance of rules and order, or else, anyone can take one’s life just to express their emotional distress like anger. To sum up, good psychology patterns of humankind are attained only by the proactive laws and regulations which insists the individual to live their fruitful life without engaging themselves in crime for their own cause and also, without misusing the natural habitat.
The
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people’s
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behavioural
patterns are dependent
directly
on the law and order introduced by the human, to the human. If there is no such regulations, it could mislead the entire humankind on the
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negative
prospect of
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life
that
eventually
results in increased number of crimes and misuse of
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natural
resources.

After all
, the humankind is
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just
a social animal that hunts the
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natural
resources like forest, for the sake of their
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
own
prosperity. It is the propaganda of the
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
Government
that plays a major role to look after this issue. The competitiveness among the
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people
, to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
live
a luxurious
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life
lead them to disturb the
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natural
habitat.
For instance
, if there is no law, then the business
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people
would have
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
destroyed
the entire plants for the manufacturing of paper, furniture, etc. It is the policy of the
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
Government
that had
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
helped
to save the planet Earth from such activities.

In addition
, the crime number would increase
drastically
as a result
of
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people’s
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independency
on
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decision making
during the venture of
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life
. The rage of balancing the pace with others in the society
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makes
the individual to fail the sense of
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analysing
their
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own
actions. Imprisonment and punishment are the consequences of the
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wrong
doings,
for example
, the
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people
committing murder out of anger
are brought
under the jurisdiction to prevail the justice for the lost
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life
. This indicates the importance of
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
rules
and order, or else, anyone can take one’s
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life
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just
to express their emotional distress like anger.

To sum up,
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good
psychology patterns of humankind
are attained
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
only
by the proactive laws and regulations which insists the individual to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
live
their fruitful
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
life
without engaging themselves in crime for their
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
own
cause and
also
, without misusing the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
natural
habitat.
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IELTS essay Society is based on rules and laws. If individuals were free to do whatever they want to do, it could not function. with the above statement?

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
291 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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