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society is based on rules and laws it could not function if individuals were free to do whatever they wanted to do to what extent do you agree or disagree?

society is based on rules and laws it could not function if individuals were free to do whatever they wanted to do 7ewn
It cannot be denied that rules and laws are an integral part of society. which provide safety to individuals in every Nation. a segment of society believes that, some rules and laws are against their freedom I opine that legislation is very crucial in the country. I will discuss point before reach the conclusion. to begin with, law and rules are made with the help of society people for better safety there are a number of rules and regulations that protect people from the detrimental situations such as crossing the read lights, deforestation, factories not allowed between the city, these laws are very helpful which made by the government for example, during the driving if people will not follow rad lights rules then it will cause the accident that will lead to death. furthermore, if the government had not made a rule against the deforestation that could be dreadful for the environment. as people can easily cut down the trees for their benefit such as making furniture, burning stove and for other purposes. if rules will not be in society individuals can easily cause harm to others as people will knew that they will misdeed anything there is no law that will punish them for their mistake. for instance sometimes during serious fight individuals can easily kill others for the reason that nobody could send them in prison. on the other hand, some people think that, some rules are not needed to for a long time, however, if the government make a rule and laws for a short time period that will not be better for run the society. citizen has to right to raise their voice. whenever, they find any regulation that needs modification. in conclusion rules and laws are a must so people should follow the rules and laws as per their country.
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be denied
that
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and
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are an integral part of
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society
.
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which
provide safety to individuals in every Nation.
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a
segment of
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society
believes that,
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some
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rules
and
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laws
are against their freedom I opine that legislation is
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very
crucial in the country. I will discuss point
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before
reach the conclusion.
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to
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begin
with,
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law
and
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rules
are made
with the
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help
of
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society
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people
for better safety there are a number of
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rules
and regulations that protect
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people
from the detrimental situations such as crossing the read lights, deforestation, factories not
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allowed
between the city, these
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laws
are
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very
helpful which made by the
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government
for example
, during the driving if
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people
will not follow rad lights
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rules
then it will cause the accident that will lead to death.

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furthermore
, if the
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government
had not made a
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rule
against the deforestation that could be dreadful for the environment.
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as
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people
can
easily
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cut
down the trees for their benefit such as making furniture, burning stove and for
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other
purposes.
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if
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rules
will not be in
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society
individuals can
easily
cause harm to others as
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people
will knew that they will misdeed anything there is no
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law
that will punish them for their mistake.
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for
instance
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sometimes
during serious fight individuals can
easily
kill others for the reason that nobody could
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send
them in prison.

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on
the
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other
hand,
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some
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people
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think
that,
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some
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rules
are not needed to for a long time,
however
, if the
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government
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make
a
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rule
and
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laws
for a short time period that will not be better for run the
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society
.
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citizen
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has to
right to raise their voice.
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whenever
, they find any regulation that needs modification.

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in
conclusion
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rules
and
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laws
are a
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must
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so
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people
should follow the
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rules
and
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laws
as per their country.

IELTS essay society is based on rules and laws it could not function if individuals were free to do whatever they wanted to do

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
305 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0
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