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Society is based on rules and laws. If individuals were free to do whatever they want to do, it could not function. To what extent do you agree or disagree with the above statement?

Society is based on rules and laws. If individuals were free to do whatever they want to do, it could not function. with the above statement? YLEwN
The statement opines that the rules and laws are currently running our entire society, in the absence of this rules and regulations an individual can do whatever they want. They do not need any permission from anyone. Thus the society would not function properly. So, Society is not allowing an indivial to do this kind of things by means of laws. I completely agree with this statement. Considering current world, people can not do social activites which affecting the surrounding that includes people, animals, birds and last but not least the envirnment. As we know animals cannot do such things, they do whatever they want. They does not care about whether it is going to affect others or not. They may have fights within their own group to take the leader position, for this they do not have any laws. But, on the contrary, humans are have their sixth sense which aids them to differentiate the odds which should not done. Now a days, people take leadership by means of the rules which were already defined by the preceders. It makes sense, rather than fighting for leadership it should be given to them based on the rights they have. To illustrate this, take any organisation whether it may be a public or private sector they have organisation structure, rules and regulations which has to been followed. Thus all organisations have to be under set of rules assigned within that contitent. Employees and employers have a set of rules and responsiblities, some actions have to taken by the higher officials to ran organisation in the obvious way. If anyone can have do any actions and they can work on whatever they want means the organisation will not survive. If we have to follow some rules like reporting, punctuality then only the organisation goal can be achieved. On the other side organisation will go to a decline path and thus it leads to loss and the people depending on that will suffer a lot. This is why an society must been run based on rules and laws. It will give some people some power to take actions. To summarise this, rules are really neccessary to run everyone's life. We all should follow the same like traffic rules which will eliminate the accidents. So these rules are for us to safegaurd not to be ignored.
The statement opines that the
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and
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laws
are
currently
running our entire
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society
, in the absence of
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this
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rules
and regulations an individual can do whatever they want. They do not need any permission from anyone.
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Thus
the
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society
would not function
properly
.
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So
,
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Society
is not allowing an
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indivial
to do this kind of things by means of
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laws
. I completely
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agree
with this statement.

Considering
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current
world,
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people
can not do social
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activites
which affecting the surrounding that includes
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people
, animals, birds and last
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but
not least the
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envirnment
. As we know animals cannot do such things, they do whatever they want. They
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does
not care about whether it is going to affect others or not. They may have fights within their
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own
group to take the leader position, for this they do not have any
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laws
.
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But
,
on the contrary
, humans are
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have
their sixth sense which aids them to differentiate the odds which should not done.
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Now a days
,
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people
take leadership by means of the
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rules
which were already defined by the
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preceders
. It
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makes
sense,
rather
than fighting for leadership it should be
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given
to them based on the rights they have.

To illustrate this, take any
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organisation
whether it may be a public or private sector they have
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organisation
structure,
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rules
and regulations which
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has to
been followed
.
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Thus
all
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organisations
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have to
be under set of
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rules
assigned within that
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contitent
. Employees and employers have a set of
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rules
and
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responsiblities
,
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some
actions
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have to
taken by the higher officials to ran
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organisation
in the obvious way. If anyone can have
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do
any
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actions and
they can work on whatever they want means the
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organisation
will not survive. If we
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have to
follow
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some
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rules
like reporting, punctuality then
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only
the
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organisation
goal can
be achieved
. On the other side
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organisation
will go to a decline path and
thus
it leads to loss and the
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people
depending on that will suffer a lot. This is why
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an
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society
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must
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been
run based on
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rules
and
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laws
. It will give
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some
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people
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some
power to take actions.

To
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summarise
this,
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rules
are
really
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neccessary
to run everyone's life. We all should follow the same
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like
traffic
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rules
which will eliminate the accidents.
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So
these
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rules
are for us to
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safegaurd
not to be
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ignored
.
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IELTS essay Society is based on rules and laws. If individuals were free to do whatever they want to do, it could not function. with the above statement?

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
392 words
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