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Society consists of a large number people in the specific area at the certain time.

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Society consists of a large number people in the specific area at the certain time. Some believe thet one person cannot impact on the society alone. Therefore, new development bring about by governments or large institutions and this event is inevitable. From my point of view, coorpration between governments and individuals can be successful to affected on community. First of all, as we khow, the most important problem always solve by the governments, organizations and institutions. This is usual and clear issues because of theirs power which they can make decisions and policy. For example, when a persident to come to power, he/she can develope economic, improve education systems and correct the rules which it can be some improvement in his/ her country development. On the other hand, the dictatorial system can lead to poorless people, frustrated and less respect in across the world. Secondly, not any government can create prosperty society without individuals' helps. For instance, most ways to become better situation that suggested by genius one that come among people. In conclusion, i think that individuals are able to bringing new innovation and create changes among society. I personally believe, the governments and people are two parts of society that affected on each other.
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consists of a large number
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people
in the specific area at the certain time.
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person cannot impact on the
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society
alone.
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, new development bring about by
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governments
or large institutions and this
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event
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and individuals can be successful to
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affected
on community.
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, as we
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khow
, the most
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important
problem always solve by the
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governments
, organizations and institutions. This is usual and
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clear
issues
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because
of theirs power which they can
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make
decisions and policy.
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, when a
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come
to power, he/she can
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develope
economic,
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improve
education systems and correct the
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rules
which it can be
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improvement in his/ her country development.
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, the dictatorial system can lead to
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people
, frustrated and less respect in across the world.
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government
can create
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prosperty
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society
without individuals'
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helps
.
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, most ways to become better situation that suggested by genius one that
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come
among
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people
.
In conclusion
,
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think
that individuals are able to bringing new innovation and create
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changes
among
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society
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governments
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people
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society
that
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IELTS essay Society consists of a large number people in the specific area at the certain time.

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
206 words
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.0
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