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"Societies that do not expect and honor their women can never make progress." Write an essay of about 250 words to state your point of view.

"Societies that do not expect and honor their women can never make progress. " Write an essay of about 250 words to state your point of view. ELEeb
It is believed that behind the success of men, there is a firm support of women in the rear. In fact, this statement can be generalized for a state that any countries or nations which looked down on the weaker position will soon be perished. I am in accord with this opinion because of some plausible reason. The prologue of my agreement will be clarified by striking comparisons between the way females were treated in the old-fashioned error and in this civilization. In the past, women did not receive any respect from other people, especially the stronger members. The brutalities which have been done on women are uncountable. This act cannot be considered as the male’s strength; however, it is the sign of the weakness which is being camouflaged. In addition, women were regarded as slaves and working tools simultaneously. Rape cases, nuisances and abuse happened in female have rised to a staggering rate. In contrast, women are now looked on as men and they are treated fairly in this globalization. To buttress my point of view I would mention the success of the USA. This country has done a great job in terms of protecting and treating women as equal. The power of America is partially formed by the weaker member’s ingenious mindset having contributed to the progress of their country. women are truly heroes because they have the ability to wear many hát at the same time from housework, bringing up their children to contriving their jobs. Therefore, why do societies have to bend reality and deprive females of their rights? Mother Teresa, Indira Gandhi, Margaret Thatcher, these names have proved themselves in particular and women in general by enlightening the lives of many people. They are the apparent symbol of sublime role and sacrifice of the women. In conclusion, women are the most brilliant gift ever that God gave to Earth, so they have to be treated equally in the eyes of society. People should inculcate in their blood that respecting the weaker position is a necessity. Everyone had better work together to give this problem a reasonable solution in order to uphold the esteem of women.
It
is believed
that behind the success of
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
men
, there is a firm support of
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
women
in the rear. In fact, this statement can
be generalized
for a state that any countries or nations which looked down on the weaker position will
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
soon
be perished
. I am in accord with this opinion
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
because
of
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
some
plausible reason.

The prologue of my agreement will
be clarified
by striking comparisons between the way females
were treated
in the
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
old
-fashioned error and in this civilization. In the past,
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
women
did not receive any respect from other
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
people
,
especially
the stronger members. The brutalities which have
been done
on
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
women
are uncountable. This act cannot
be considered
as the male’s strength;
however
, it is the
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
sign
of the weakness which is
being camouflaged
.
In addition
,
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
women
were regarded
as slaves and working tools
simultaneously
. Rape cases, nuisances and abuse happened in female have
Possible spelling mistake. Did you mean "rose", the past tense form of the verb 'rise'?
rised
to a staggering rate.
In contrast
,
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
women
are
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
now
looked on as
Use a comma before 'and' if it connects two independent clauses (unless they are closely connected and short).
men and
they
are treated
fairly
in this globalization.

To buttress my point of view I would mention the success of the USA. This country has done a great job in terms of protecting and treating
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
women
as equal. The power of America is
partially
formed by the weaker member’s ingenious mindset having contributed to the progress of their country.
This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
women
are
truly
heroes
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
because
they have the ability to wear
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
many
Possible spelling mistake found.
hát
at the same time from housework, bringing up their children to contriving their jobs.
Therefore
, why do societies
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
have to
bend reality and deprive females of their rights? Mother Teresa, Indira Gandhi, Margaret Thatcher, these names have proved themselves
in particular
and
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
women
in general
by enlightening the
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
lives
of
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
many
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
people
. They are the apparent symbol of sublime role and sacrifice of the women.

In conclusion
,
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
women
are the most brilliant gift ever that God gave to Earth,
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
so
they
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
have to
be treated
equally
in the eyes of society.
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
People
should inculcate in their blood that respecting the weaker position is a necessity. Everyone had better work together to give this problem a reasonable solution in order to uphold the esteem of
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
women
.
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IELTS essay "Societies that do not expect and honor their women can never make progress. " Write an essay of about 250 words to state your point of view.

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
360 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.0
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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