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Social media has improved human communication. Do you agree or disagree?

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Social networks are an essential part of today's society. The development of technology helped massively in the creation of this new so called virtual world. I completely agree that these types of media contribute in improving of human communication. Firstly, by having social media long distance communications are now possible. The availability and accessibility are the main advantage. Just by having an internet connection people can get in touch with everyone around the world. These is causing a mix of a variety of different people from different cultures and it creates a strong unity in the world. In addition, it is all for free. While in the past it was hard and fairly expensive to talk and chat with somebody far from you, today that isn't the problem. I think the main advantage is that people are getting to know a different style of life than their's. By doing that they are improving their social abilities. Covid 19 is another example why social media is a must. During the lockdown in the whole world people didn't have the chance to talk and see each other in person. Therefore online communication really helped. Furthermore it gave people hope of better things to come. On the other hand social media has its negative side. There is a much hatred in these places. Many people are victims of online violence. So we must be careful on these networks. All in all, social media elevated communication to a whole new level. It is really benefitial for everyone. It unites the world. But still we should be careful when using it.
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today
's society. The development of technology
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helped
massively
in the creation of this new
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so called
virtual
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world
. I completely
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agree
that these types of
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media
contribute in improving of human
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communication
.
Firstly
, by having
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social
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media
long distance communications are
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now
possible. The availability and accessibility are the main advantage.
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Just
by having an internet connection
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people
can
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get
in touch with everyone around the
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world
.
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causing a mix of a variety of
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different
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people
from
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different
cultures and it creates a strong unity in the
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world
.
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, it is all for free. While in the past it was
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hard
and
fairly
expensive to talk and chat with somebody far from you,
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today
that isn't the problem. I
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the main advantage is that
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people
are getting to know a
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different
style of life than
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their's
. By doing that they are improving their
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social
abilities.
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Covid 19
is another example why
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social
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media
is a
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must
. During the lockdown in the whole
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world
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people
didn't have the chance to talk and
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see
each other in person.
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Therefore
online
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communication
really
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helped
.
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Furthermore
it gave
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people
hope of better things to
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come
.
On the other hand
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social
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media
has its
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negative
side. There is
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hatred in these places.
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people
are victims of online violence.
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we
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must
be careful on these networks. All in all,
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social
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media
elevated
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communication
to a whole new level. It is
really
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benefitial
for everyone. It unites the
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world
.
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But
still
we should be careful when using it.
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IELTS essay Social media has improved human communication.

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