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Social conscience can lead people in much healthier environment

Social conscience can lead people in much healthier environment pXOQ0

Sustainability and ethical consumption are the most discussed issues during the last decade. This tendency is encouraged by the humans who are willing to enhance societies’ social conscience and make positive evolution toward environment. We all agree base of healthier conditions is originating from the social conscience. Limited consumption of resources, recycling used materials and eco-friendly standards firmly impacts’ our nature.

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IELTS essay Social conscience can lead people in much healthier environment

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American English

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61 words

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