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Smoking should be banned.At what extend do you agree or disagree the statement

Smoking should be banned. At what extend 5Aw6p
There are many of theories and medical studies have shown that smoking causes many health problems those who yield but also for people close by. In this essay I am strongly agree that it should be banned in public place. Smoking is not against the law, so individual you have freedom to smoke where you wish. Not everyone is aware about health hazard by smoking. Passive and active smokers both can release a large amount of tobacco smoke in environment and that cause inhalation by people within that environment. Everyone has a limit to adopt that poisonous air but after that, it can cause some serious health hazard. Disease like skin allergy, chronic obstructive pulmonary (COPD), Asthma and lung cancer and many others. Thus, why caution or warring had there on smoking products and before any visual of yield of smoking. However, there are more convincing facts and truth in favour of ban. First, we have to understand that it has been proven that tobacco consist carcinogenic compound which cause some serious health problems and this statement comes out by itself of tobacco companies because health is more important than the business. For an example, because of one smoker in any public place (public transport, restaurant, café and other) we can’t harm or take some serious health risk of any people. People’s good health is must important or should be the first priority of any nation. Overall, it is clear that it should be made illegal to smoke or consuming tobacco in public place, and also should be considered in crime. This would help improve health thousands of people and that most definitely positive development.
There are
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many
of theories and medical studies have shown that smoking
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causes
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many
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health
problems those who yield
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but
also
for
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people
close by. In this essay I am
strongly
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agree
that it should
be banned
in
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public
place.

Smoking is not against the law,
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so
individual you have freedom to smoke where you wish. Not everyone is aware about
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health
hazard by smoking. Passive and active smokers both can release a large amount of
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tobacco
smoke in environment and that
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cause
inhalation by
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people
within that environment. Everyone has a limit to adopt that poisonous air
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but
after that, it can
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cause
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some
serious
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health
hazard. Disease like skin allergy, chronic obstructive pulmonary (COPD), Asthma and lung cancer and
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many
others.
Thus
, why caution or warring had there on smoking products and
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before
any visual of yield of smoking.

However
, there are more convincing facts and truth in
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favour
of ban.
First
, we
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have to
understand that it has
been proven
that
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tobacco
consist carcinogenic compound which
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cause
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some
serious
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health
problems and this statement
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comes
out by itself of
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tobacco
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companies
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because
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health
is more
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important
than the business. For an example,
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because
of one smoker in any
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public
place
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(public
transport, restaurant, café and other) we can’t harm or take
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some
serious
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health
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risk
of any
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people
.
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People’s
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good
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health
is
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must
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important
or should be the
first
priority of any nation.

Overall
, it is
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clear
that it should
be made
illegal to smoke or consuming
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tobacco
in
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public
place, and
also
should
be considered
in crime. This would
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help
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improve
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health
thousands of
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people
and that most definitely
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positive
development.
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IELTS essay Smoking should be banned. At what extend

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
275 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0
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