Do you want to improve your writing? Try our new evaluation service and get detailed feedback.
Check Your Text it's free

Many students are interested in study at universities in a foreign country

Many students are interested in study at universities in a foreign country 2r9ak
Many students are interested in study at universities in a foreign country. Some ones can go to the most prestigious universities and learn their favorite field in the best ones. I would like to discuss the advantages and disadvantages of this. Firstly, some of these students should live in campus accommodation at university. They learn to live in a group and this condition increase their social relationships. Secondly, they are familiar with different cultures and different languages. They should communicate with other students, teachers and other people and they have to improve their language skills. Additionally, they can increase their knowledge and skills about favorite field. on the other hand, they are alone and suffer from the feeling of homesickness. These people are very young and this situation is challenging for them. They may become acquainted with bad friends and be led astray. furthermore, they sometimes have to work to pay university and living expenses in that country. When they should work part time, they don’t focus on lessons. To sum up, studying at universities in a foreign country is often useful for students, and they can improve their knowledge and can become a valuable person for their community.
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
Many
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
students
are interested
in study at
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
universities
in a foreign country.
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
Some
ones can go to the most prestigious
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
universities
and learn their favorite field in the best ones. I would like to discuss the advantages and disadvantages of this.

Firstly
,
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
some
of these
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
students
should
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
live
in campus accommodation at
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
university
. They learn to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
live
in a group and this condition increase their social relationships.
Secondly
, they are familiar with
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
different
cultures and
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
different
languages. They should communicate with other
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
students
, teachers and other
Use a comma before 'and' if it connects two independent clauses (unless they are closely connected and short).
people and
they
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
have to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
improve
their language
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
skills
.
Additionally
, they can increase their knowledge and
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
skills
about favorite field.

This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
on
the other hand, they are alone and suffer from the feeling of homesickness. These
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
people
are
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
very
young and this situation is challenging for them. They may become acquainted with
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
bad
friends and
be led
astray.
This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
furthermore
, they
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
sometimes
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
have to
work to pay
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
university
and living expenses in that country. When they should work
This word is normally spelled with hyphen.
part time
, they don’t focus on lessons.

To sum up, studying at
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
universities
in a foreign country is
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
often
useful for
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
students
, and they can
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
improve
their knowledge and can become a valuable person for their community.
What do you think?
  • This is funny writingFunny
  • I love this writingLove
  • This writing has blown my mindWow
  • It made me angryAngry
  • It made me sadSad

IELTS essay Many students are interested in study at universities in a foreign country

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
199 words
This writing has been penalized,
text can't be
less than 250 words in Task 2
and less than 150 words in Task 1
5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
  • ?
    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
  • ?
    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
Labels Descriptions
  • ?
    Currently is not available
  • Meet the criteria
  • Doesn't meet the criteria
Recent posts