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GENERATION GAP IS AS OLD AS HUMANITY. WHAT ARE THE CAUSES OF GENERATION GAP? WHAT CAN BE DONE TO STRIKE A BALANCE IN THE RELATIONS WITH THE TWO GENERATIONS

GENERATION GAP IS AS OLD AS HUMANITY. WHAT ARE THE CAUSES OF GENERATION GAP? WHAT CAN BE DONE TO STRIKE A BALANCE IN THE RELATIONS WITH THE TWO GENERATIONS 0696n
The notion of the generation gap has existed for a long time but over recent years it has become more prominent in our society and is now being seen and addressed as a major problem of our society. The generation gap as stated by definition is considered as a difference between personal choices, opinions and perceptions of different generations which leads to conflicts and gaps between family members. Several causative factors, as well as the solution, shall be discussed in the subsequent paragraphs. To initiate with, the generation gap has created a rift in familial relationships since joint families are being disintegrated where there was a head of the family whose word has to be followed by each and every member of the family. However, nowadays, there are mostly nuclear families which result in a lack of communication and respect, dependent on gadgets at a very early stage and so on. Moreover, it has been observed that there are different opinions, experiences, beliefs and attitudes amongst parents and children which creates misunderstanding between them because of the rapid changes in the society as well as the life’s expectations have been increased lately. To counter such issues, both parents and children should be willing to learn and accept with the help of realization along with a high level of understanding so that they shall be able to discuss their own experiences whether funny or sad. Accordingly, they should spend time with each other by creating fun and enjoyable activities which can aid to create an emotional bond. To incapsulate, by acquiring the path least resistance, different generations can diminish this yawning gap between them which aids them to respect each other. Additionally, they should be accomplished to accept their determination, reliance through proper communication.
The notion of the generation
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has existed for a long time
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but
over recent years it has become more prominent in our society and is
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now
being
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seen
and addressed as a major problem of our society. The generation
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gap
as stated by definition
is considered
as a difference between personal choices, opinions and perceptions of
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different
generations which leads to conflicts and
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gaps
between
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family
members. Several causative factors,
as well
as the solution, shall
be discussed
in the subsequent paragraphs.

To initiate with, the generation
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gap
has created a rift in familial relationships since joint
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families
are
being disintegrated
where there was a head of the
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family
whose word
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has to
be followed
by each and every member of the
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family
.
However
, nowadays, there are
mostly
nuclear
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families
which result in a lack of communication and respect, dependent on gadgets at a
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very
early stage and
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so
on.
Moreover
, it has
been observed
that there are
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different
opinions, experiences, beliefs and attitudes amongst parents and children which creates misunderstanding between them
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because
of the rapid
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changes
in the society
as well
as the life’s expectations have
been increased
lately.

To counter such issues, both parents and children should be willing to learn and accept with the
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help
of realization along with a high level of understanding
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so
that they shall be able to discuss their
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own
experiences whether
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funny
or sad.
Accordingly
, they should spend time with each other by creating fun and enjoyable activities which can aid to create an emotional bond.

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incapsulate
, by acquiring the path
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least
resistance,
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different
generations can diminish this yawning
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gap
between them which aids them to respect each other.
Additionally
, they should
be accomplished
to accept their determination, reliance through proper communication.
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IELTS essay GENERATION GAP IS AS OLD AS HUMANITY. WHAT ARE THE CAUSES OF GENERATION GAP? WHAT CAN BE DONE TO STRIKE A BALANCE IN THE RELATIONS WITH THE TWO GENERATIONS

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
293 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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