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Describe your favourite neighborhood

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I just tell you that our family know so numerous neighbour. Due to my father work as a clerk under government. Therefore we all are suffering from shifting one place to another that's why our family meet lot of person(neighbour). But one of my favourite neighbour is in rohtak where we spend our most of the time in our life. In his family their are six member living together in one house. It was very loving and caring person in my entire life. We all never meet this type of members also they have a girl children who is three year older then me and boy his age is similar like my age. In this family his father was very diligent and very kind in nature. He always in some notion about their children future. I heard the most of time when both parent are talk together and always worry about their children. Her mother always motivate and giving courage me for doing diligent in your life. Becouse life is very barely. His father suggest me for doing study for your better future. Also they always doing social work and always prepare to assist to anyone at any time at any cost. Also he bought a new car which is very nice and gave us a treat for this new car. They had been waiting for this movement for a long time. But his father want i white colour but the girl suggest and do sturbone for black color. And his father always do things which her children say.
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you that our
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family
know
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so
numerous
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neighbour
. Due to my
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father
work as a clerk under
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government
.
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Therefore
we all are suffering from shifting one place to another that's why our
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family
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meet
lot of person(
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neighbour
).
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one of my
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favourite
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neighbour
is in
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rohtak
where we spend our most of the
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time
in our
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life
. In his
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family
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their
are six
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member
living together in one
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house
. It was
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very
loving and caring person in my entire
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life
. We all never
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meet
this type of members
also
they have a girl
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children
who
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is
three year
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older then
me and boy his age is similar like my age. In this
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family
his
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father
was
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very
diligent and
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very
kind in nature. He always in
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some
notion about their
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children
future. I heard the most of
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time
when both parent are talk together and always worry about their
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children
. Her mother always motivate and giving courage me for doing diligent in your
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life
.
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Becouse
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life
is
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barely
. His
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father
suggest me for doing study for your better future.
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Also
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they always doing
social work and always prepare to assist to anyone at any
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time
at any cost.
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Also
he
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bought
a new car which is
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very
nice and gave us a treat for this new car. They had been waiting for this movement for a long
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time
.
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But
his
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father
want i white
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colour
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but
the girl suggest and do
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sturbone
for black color. And his
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father
always do things which her
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children
say.
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IELTS essay Describe your favourite neighborhood

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
259 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.0
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.0
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 5.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
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    Present relevant ideas
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