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Many people believe that lecture halls have been replaced by online learning. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Many people believe that lecture halls have been replaced by online learning. eRQKV
Online learning is good but learning in a lecture hall is much better. Through this I will show why I disagreed. Learning through computers is good but it makes students distracting for instance when in online lecture the lecturer can't give full attention to every student individually therefore students can do whatever they want but when it comes to lecture halls lecturer will able to identify the students who are not giving attention to the lesson and will be able to advise them and also teacher can give extra attention to the weak students. In addition, classes make the students meet each other it will improve the sociality skills and also the friendship of students rather than seeing each other from computer screen. It will reduce their stress and anxiety and benefitable for overall health. Furthermore, in Sri Lanka students have preferred classrooms instead of online classes. To conclude students receive better advantage from classrooms than online classes
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lecture the lecturer can't give full attention to every
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can do whatever they want
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who are not giving attention to the lesson and will be able to advise them and
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teacher can give extra attention to the weak students.

In addition
, classes
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, in Sri Lanka
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have preferred classrooms
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To conclude
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receive better advantage from classrooms than
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classes

IELTS essay Many people believe that lecture halls have been replaced by online learning.

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