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Smoking not only harms the smoker, but also those who are nearby. Therefore, smoking should be banned in public places. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Medical studies have show that smoke not only lead to health problems for the smoker, but also for people close by. As a result of this, many believe that smok should not be allowe in public places. Although there are arguments on both sides, I strongly agree that a ban is the most appropriate course of action. In my point of view, we are all responsoble about our healt. And we should take care about our bodies.
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In my point of view, we are all responsoble about our healt. And we should take care about our bodies.

IELTS essay Smoking not only harms the smoker, but also those who are nearby. Therefore, smoking should be banned in public places.

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