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Smoken foods are popular worldwide because of their special flavour and their long life.

Smoken foods are popular worldwide because of their special flavour and their long life. b36e6
The proces involved popular worldwide smoking foods bacause of their special flavour and their long time. Overall, there are a lot of steps which close lid and finally ground level. Fist of all air is spreat to underground and close lid. Then air is burn fire in closed lid, then fire burn logs. In the second step fire is passed via pipe and give bricks, which smoked foods such as fishes and ckiken heated in the box. Finally it became ground level.
The
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proces
involved popular worldwide smoking foods
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bacause
of their special
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flavour
and their long time.

Overall
, there are
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a lot of
steps which close lid and
finally
ground level.

Fist of all air is
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spreat
to underground and close lid. Then air is burn fire in closed lid, then fire burn logs. In the second step fire
is passed
via pipe and give bricks, which smoked foods such as fishes and
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ckiken
heated in the box.
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Finally
it became ground level.

IELTS essay Smoken foods are popular worldwide because of their special flavour and their long life.

Essay
  American English
3 paragraphs
82 words
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4.0
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.0
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