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smartphones have both positive and negative effects on students . do you agree and disagree with the statement ?

smartphones have both positive and negative effects on students. J37Gk

These days, using a smartphone is more and more popular in our lives. However, I believe that this trend will bring both positive and negative. On the one hand, we can take substantial positive of looking for information quickly. Firstly, it helps students learn a lot of knowledge because many websites and many channels on the internet supply a lot of information about all subjects. Secondly, students can relax after the school day. For example, they are listening to music, watching films and programme, chatting with friends. On the other hand, several negative aspects of watching smartphones for a long time make health worse. Moreover, students addicted to games lead to loss of concentration in learning, poor academic results. To sum up, using a smartphone will bring both positive and negative. I think people should take advantage of the pros and minimize the cons of this issue.

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.

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, chatting with friends.

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, students addicted to games lead to loss of concentration in learning, poor academic results.

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positive
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negative
. I This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :reckonassumebelieveconsider
think
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 should take advantage of the pros and minimize the cons of this issue. 