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Small interprises are being phased out and replaced by big multinational corporations

Small interprises are being phased out and replaced by big multinational corporations m39bq
Technical advance and establish superior industries is backbone of individual country however, nowadays large industries wipeout minor companies and make their influence. according to me the demerits of this notion out numbered it's merits. To embark upon, there are numerous benefits of multinational companies. In other words, the replacing small factories is good for overall development of nation because the contribution of small industries is are very low and they don't give proper service to consumers by which they get low quality products and fell tired. Moreover, the majority of small companies are not permit by higher authorities which is not good because they don't contribute in taxes by which the gross domestic product (GDP) rate dip down and economic crises come. To epitome, In india about major sector of this are not giving proper tax and make there Identity secret and do there work. Secondly, It's is right decision if government give more importance towards multinational companies. To explain it, The infrastructure of these companies is better as compare to another ones and the good interior as well as exterior give sense of fulfillment and happiness to employees. Moreover, the privacy and policies are also well organised and proper wage also provided too. Moreover, the advance technology equipmentes also play an imperative role in production by which the quality and quantity are prefered bu public. For instance, companies like Amazon and flipcart do there best and gain popularity in all over the globe. To conclude, although small companies are try to give there best yet it will be good if multinational companies came because of its good fcalities as well as better term and condition.
Technical advance and establish superior industries is backbone of individual country
however
, nowadays large
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industries
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wipeout
minor
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companies
and
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make
their influence.
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according to me
the demerits of this notion out numbered
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it's
merits.

To embark upon, there are numerous benefits of multinational
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companies
.
In other words
, the replacing
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small
factories is
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good
for
overall
development of nation
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because
the contribution of
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small
industries is are
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very
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low and
they don't
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give
proper service to consumers by which they
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get
low quality products and fell tired.
Moreover
, the majority of
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small
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companies
are not permit by higher authorities which is not
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good
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because
they don't contribute in taxes by which the gross domestic product (GDP) rate dip down and economic crises
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come
. To epitome, In
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india
about major sector of this are not giving proper tax and
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make
there Identity secret and do there work.

Secondly
,
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It's is
right decision if
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government
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give
more importance towards multinational
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companies
. To
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explain
it, The infrastructure of these
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companies
is better
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as
compare to another ones and the
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good
interior
as well
as exterior
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give
sense of fulfillment and happiness to employees.
Moreover
, the privacy and policies are
also
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well organised
and proper wage
also
provided too.
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Moreover
, the advance technology
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equipmentes
also
play an imperative role in production by which the quality and quantity are
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prefered
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bu
public.
For instance
,
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companies
like Amazon and
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flipcart
do there best and gain popularity in all over the globe.

To conclude
, although
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small
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companies
are try to
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give
there best
yet
it will be
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good
if multinational
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companies
came
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because
of its
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good
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fcalities
as well
as better term and condition.
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IELTS essay Small interprises are being phased out and replaced by big multinational corporations

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4 paragraphs
276 words
6.0
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