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In digital technology times, there is a wide range of activities which can be done virtually on the social networks and learning can be online. Many people know that learning which students and teachers are in real classes is offline whereas online learning is different. By using electronic devices connected with Internet and creating virtual class rooms, people can see the other faces and talk to each other. First of all, online and offline learning all help education become effective. They give knowledge from teachers to students in many countries. Secondly, the most different between two of them is the places where studying takes place. On one hand, it requires people to gather in one real place. On the other hand, online learning does not require teachers and learners to be in the same place. This means they can stay at home or anywhere appropriate and make sure that connection is stable for running the virtual classroom. In conclusion, online and offline learning have advantages and disadvantages; however both of which all have one reason for existing that is helping learning more effective.
In digital technology times, there is a wide range of activities which can
be done
virtually
on the social networks and
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learning
can be
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online
.
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Many
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people
know that
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learning
which students and teachers are in real classes is offline whereas
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online
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learning
is
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different
. By using electronic devices connected with Internet and creating virtual
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class
rooms,
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people
can
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see
the other faces and talk to each other.

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First of all
,
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online
and offline
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learning
all
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help
education become effective. They give knowledge from teachers to students in
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many
countries.

Secondly
, the most
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different
between two of them is the
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places
where studying takes
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place
. On one hand, it requires
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people
to gather in one real
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place
.
On the other hand
,
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online
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learning
does not require teachers and learners to be in the same
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place
. This means they can stay at home or anywhere appropriate and
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
make
sure that connection is stable for running the virtual classroom.

In conclusion
,
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online
and offline
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learning
This verb is used with the infinitive: "to have"
have
advantages and disadvantages;
however
both of which all have one reason for existing
that is
helping
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learning
more effective.
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IELTS essay online learning and offline learning

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
183 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
and less than 150 words in Task 1
5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.0
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
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Task Achievement: 5.5
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