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Since the outbreak of the COVID-19 pandemic and the advent of a vaccine against this disease, there have been many conflicting opinions on whether to force the population and their children to be vaccinated against the disease because of the adverse effects of dangerous side effects of this vaccine. In my opinion, vaccination for the entire population is essential, and to prove this point, I will give my arguments and evidence.

Since the outbreak of the COVID-19 pandemic and the advent of a vaccine against this disease, there have been many conflicting opinions on whether to force the population and their children to be vaccinated against the disease because of the adverse effects of dangerous side effects of this vaccine. In my opinion, vaccination for the entire population is essential, and to prove this point, I will give my arguments and evidence. MBGMa
Since the outbreak of the COVID-19 pandemic and the advent of a vaccine against this disease, there have been many conflicting opinions on whether to force the population and their children to be vaccinated against the disease because of the adverse effects of dangerous side effects of this vaccine. In my opinion, vaccination for the entire population is essential, and to prove this point, I will give my arguments and evidence.
Since the outbreak of the COVID-19 pandemic and the advent of a vaccine against this disease, there have been
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conflicting opinions on whether to force the population and their children to
be vaccinated
against the disease
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of the adverse effects of
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side effects of this vaccine. In my opinion, vaccination for the entire population is essential, and to prove this point, I will give my arguments and evidence.

IELTS essay Since the outbreak of the COVID-19 pandemic and the advent of a vaccine against this disease, there have been many conflicting opinions on whether to force the population and their children to be vaccinated against the disease because of the adverse effects of dangerous side effects of this vaccine. In my opinion, vaccination for the entire population is essential, and to prove this point, I will give my arguments and evidence.

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