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Pollution is a problem that we only became aware of it in the last decades, the impact of engines and coal mechines were not predictable when they were invented. These two are a great source of pollution since they are used extensively for transportation. Cars, trains, and ships consume a large amount of fossel fuel and produce lage amount of pollution as a result, hopefully electrical cars and trains will provide an alternetive which will help in solving this problem. When people think of pollution; bad air usually comes to mind, but it's not limited to that. In fact, water pollution is as danerous of a problem, as the resources for drinking water are very limited. Rivers and seas are at great risk especially, we used to dispose of our trash by throwing them in seas and even reviers, luckly this is not acceptable nowdays. We must not forget our most source of pollution, electrical generation planets, they should be the starting point if we want to put a limit to this serious problem.
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is a problem that we
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only
became aware of it in the last decades, the impact of engines and coal
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mechines
were not predictable when they
were invented
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These two are a great source of
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pollution
since they are
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used
extensively
for transportation. Cars, trains, and ships consume a large amount of
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fossel
fuel and produce
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lage
amount of
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pollution
as a result
,
hopefully
electrical cars and trains will provide an
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alternetive
which will
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help
in solving this problem.

When
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people
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think
of
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pollution
;
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bad
air
usually
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comes
to mind,
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but
it's not limited to that. In fact, water
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pollution
is as
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danerous
of a problem, as the resources for drinking water are
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very
limited. Rivers and seas are at great
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risk
especially
, we
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used
to dispose of our trash by throwing them in seas and even
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reviers
,
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luckly
this is not acceptable
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nowdays
.

We
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must
not forget our most source of
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pollution
, electrical generation planets, they should be the starting point if we want to put a limit to this serious problem.

IELTS essay Pollution Pollution Pollution

Essay
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4 paragraphs
174 words
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