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Some people believe that all children should have pet or even an animal to look after.

Some people believe that all children should have pet or even an animal to look after. BYjgm
It has been assumed that children who grow up a long side pets naturally develop an emotional bonding towards animals and in later life they become more compassionate towards flora and fauna. Some people support this opinion while others rejected. This essay will look at both sides of argument will give conclusion. The proponents of domestic animals or pets firmly believe that pets create an opportunity for kids to gain basic biological knowledge about flora and fauna. Furthermore, being a playmate for children pets for instant dogs and cats could possibly create a sense affinity with nature and have therefore imbibe respect for wildlife when makes kids more self possessed and extrovert. Conversely, the opponents of pets argue that under unhygienic conditions pets can be potential source of diseases like rabies, cat scratches, other types of dermatosis. In addition, it is argued that, if children excessively themselves with pets these may leads to lower education performance. Moreover, for less better half family maintenance of dog may prove to prohibited. Therefore, the pet may suffer from malnutrition. Which can be not only unethical but also cruel. On the whole, despite the ill consequences such as spreading disease, distraction from studies. I strongly believe, children who had brought up a long side pet show less misconduct.
It has
been assumed
that
children
who grow up a long side
pets
naturally
develop an emotional bonding towards animals and in later life they become more compassionate towards flora and fauna.
Some
people
support this opinion while others rejected. This essay will look at both sides of argument will give conclusion. The proponents of domestic animals or
pets
firmly
believe that
pets
create an opportunity for kids to gain basic biological knowledge about flora and fauna.
Furthermore
, being a playmate for
children
pets
for instant dogs and cats could
possibly
create a sense affinity with nature and have
therefore
imbibe respect for wildlife when
makes
kids more
self possessed
and extrovert.
Conversely
, the opponents of
pets
argue that under unhygienic conditions
pets
can be potential source of diseases like rabies, cat scratches, other types of
dermatosis
.
In addition
, it
is argued
that, if
children
excessively
themselves with
pets
these may leads to lower education performance.
Moreover
, for
less better
half family maintenance of dog may prove to prohibited.
Therefore
, the pet may suffer from malnutrition. Which can be not
only
unethical
but
also
cruel.

On the whole
, despite the ill consequences such as spreading disease, distraction from studies. I
strongly
believe,
children
who had brought up a long side pet
show
less misconduct.
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IELTS essay Some people believe that all children should have pet or even an animal to look after.

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