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some people believe that crime rate is increased in many nations. what is causes and its solution

some people believe that crime rate is increased in many nations. what is causes and its solution 26nlJ
Needless to say that crime rate wreaks havoc not only on development countries but also on third world countries which have led to a catastrophic secenario caused by infinite reason which conjoint to add insult of injury. This eassy is going to outline the problem and solution of violation before coming to a final conclusion. To pinpoint the parmount causing behind violence is nothing but people can influenced through celebrities and famous person. To comprehend this point, here is indefinite illustration people can watch the violent movie and tv show that things made a major role to promote crime. sometimes, celebrities do work on violence advertisements that organise a huge impact on youth. Another infamy is people do not follow any rules and regulations of government. People can always break and disobey the rules which becomes inescapable. To epitomize the current status, people do not have any kind of work. people have alot of knowledge and education but lack of unemployment that's why people can influence on crimes. Thus, due to the above mentioned reasons crime rate is majorily affected. People know in totally that action speaks louder than words. There are colossal ways and means to combat the meancing impact of crime rate on this globe but the onus is entirely on government should make strict actions own those who disobey the rules. Another unquestionable panacea is government should ban those film made violence which is also one of the best revolutions to counter this peril by leaps and bounds. Furthermore, to counter the problem of unemployment can be done. For example, many people consistently found of suitable jobs and decline the crime rate. Thus, if the above steps arr taken appropirately, this may find their solutions. To conclude, government can make strict policy who disobey the rules. People should awareness about the crime. People can spend more time with their family that helps to reduce the crime rate.
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causing behind violence is nothing
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but
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that things made a major role to promote
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crime
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sometimes
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a huge impact on youth. Another infamy is
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people
do not follow any
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rules
and regulations of
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government
.
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can always break and disobey the
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which becomes inescapable. To epitomize the
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on this globe
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strict actions
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those who disobey the
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should ban those film made violence which is
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one of the best revolutions to counter this peril by leaps and bounds.
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appropirately
, this may find their solutions.
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government
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IELTS essay some people believe that crime rate is increased in many nations. what is causes and its solution

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  American English
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