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Significance of organizing sporting events

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There is a reasonable argument put forward by a number of people in our society that organizing international sporting events not only good for the country but also it provides opportunity to redevelop and build a new cities, infrastructure and other vital services for community. Having said that such an event not only required skill full labor but also required massive amount of resource which for some countries a significant share of their gross domestic product.
There is a reasonable argument put forward by a number of
people
in our society that organizing international sporting
events
not
only
good
for the country
but
also
it provides opportunity to redevelop and build a new
cities
, infrastructure and other vital services for community. Having said that such an
event
not
only
required
skill
full labor
but
also
required massive amount of resource which for
some
countries a significant share of their gross domestic product.
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IELTS essay Significance of organizing sporting events

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  American English
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