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it is believed that rather than stopping damage to the environment people should find a method to adap to the climate change. While finding ways of adaptation are needed, I disagree that we should not tak steps to stop further harm to the environment. The main reason why steps are needed to find ways to alleviate the problem of global warming is that the rate at which the climate is warming and changing, is alarming Undeniably, global warming and the subsequent changes in climate are natural processes and are bound to happen However, if this rate i not controlled soon, we may be looking at the doom of our planet. If we do not take measures soon te stop further changes in our environment and the global climate, there might be drastic changes in ou Option ecosystem, leading to the extinction of many plants, and animal species, including the human beings Secondly, the ways we may adopt to live with the climate change, may further hasten the process of globa warming and we may complicate things beyond repair. For example, if we use more air-conditioners te fight the longer summers, then these luxuries may cause even more pollution and global warming and the rise in temperature may go up exponentially. This may lead to even more extreme climatic changes than ever before. Only over the last decade, we have had the highest and the lowest ever recorded temperatures, the worst ever floods, the most devastating storms, hurricanes and tsunamis, and many syste ph other natural disasters, which are the direct result of the climate change. If these disasters continue as mined this rate, then that day is not far, when there will be little or no life on earth. Unarguably, we have to do both, prevention and adaptation side by side. We have to adapt to theses thanges in the climate, which have already taken place, as these are irreversible New building material is required to deal with these changes in the temperatures For example, insulated materials can be used to make buildings in places where the temperatures have risen in the recent years. The design and architecture needs to be looked at and changed to deal with the extreme climatic conditions. We need to we see that the methods we are using to adapt are environment friendly. We also need to change our lifestyle ve so that we can prevent further damage as much as possible. To sum up, it can be reiterated that the rate at with the changes in the climate are occurring needs to be et controlled, but at the same time we have to adapt to these changes also, if we just focus on adapting ourselves and not do anything for preventing further damage, then it will not be enough.
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it
is believed
that
rather
than stopping damage to the environment
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people
should find a method to
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adap
to the
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climate
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change
. While finding ways of adaptation
are needed
, I disagree that we should not
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tak
steps to
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stop
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further
harm to the environment.

The main reason why steps
are needed
to find ways to alleviate the problem of
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global
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warming
is that the
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rate
at which the
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climate
is
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warming
and changing, is alarming
Undeniably
,
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global
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warming
and the subsequent
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changes
in
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climate
are natural processes and
are bound
to happen
However
, if this
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rate
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i
not controlled
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soon
, we may be looking at the doom of our planet. If we do not take measures
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soon
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te
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stop
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further
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changes
in our environment and the
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global
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climate
, there might be drastic
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changes
in
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ou
Option ecosystem, leading to the extinction of
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many
plants, and animal species, including the human
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beings


Secondly
, the ways we may
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adopt to
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live
with the
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climate
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change
, may
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further
hasten the process of
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globa
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warming and
we may complicate things beyond repair.
For example
, if we
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use
more air-conditioners
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te
fight the longer summers, then these luxuries may cause even more pollution and
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global
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warming
and the rise in
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temperature
may go up
exponentially
. This may lead to even more extreme climatic
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changes
than ever
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before
.
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Only
over the last decade, we have had the highest and the lowest ever recorded
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temperatures
, the worst ever floods, the most devastating storms, hurricanes and tsunamis, and
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many
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syste
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ph
other natural disasters, which are the direct result of the
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climate
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change
. If these disasters continue as mined this
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rate
, then that day is not far, when there will be
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little
or no life on earth.

Unarguably
, we
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have to
do both, prevention and adaptation side by side. We
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have to
adapt to theses
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thanges
in the
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climate
, which have already taken place, as these are irreversible New building material
is required
to deal with these
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changes
in the
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temperatures
For example
, insulated materials can be
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used
to
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make
buildings in places where the
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temperatures
have risen in the recent years. The design and architecture
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needs
to
be looked
at and
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changed
to deal with the extreme climatic conditions. We
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need
to we
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see
that the methods we are using to adapt are environment friendly. We
also
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need
to
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change
our lifestyle ve
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so
that we can
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prevent
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further
damage as much as possible.

To sum up, it can
be reiterated
that the
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rate
at with the
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changes
in the
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climate
are occurring
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needs
to be
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et
controlled,
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but
at the same time we
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have to
adapt to these
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changes
also
, if we
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just
focus on adapting ourselves and not do anything for preventing
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further
damage, then it will not be
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enough
.
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IELTS essay shshhshsshhhshs jss hss hss bs

Essay
  American English
5 paragraphs
465 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 6.0
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    Present relevant ideas
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  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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