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Show the similarities and/or differences between online learning and traditional learning

Show the similarities and/or differences between online learning and traditional learning GJEwx
Online learning has become a preferable way of learning in the context of recent pandemic. In comparison with traditional learning, online learning has some similar points and different points as well. Firstly, the participants in an online class have the same role as those in a virtual one. In other words, the teachers often make a preparation before teaching in traditional class, similarly, lecturers also prepare their slides and materials in advance. In addition, the students have to fulfill their homework in both online and offline classes. Despite of the similarity, online and offline learning have noble differences. The first one is in communication. It is obvious that in traditional classes a student has more opportunities to give his speech than in online courses. For example, offline-class students have more time to discuss with other classmates and interact with their tutors through the gesture, eye contact and also body language. Although there may be a requirement for pupils to turn on the camera in online classes, there is limitation such as Internet connection and students’ willingness, which leads to the lack of interaction in online learning. Another obvious difference is that online learning is much more flexible compared to traditional learning. While face-to-face classes often have fixed timetable consisting of the time to start and end class, online classes give a chance for learners to choose a suitable time to study. In conclusion, even though online learning is different from traditional learning in flexibility and opportunities to communicate, they are similar in the role of people joining in.
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has become a preferable way of
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in the context of recent pandemic.
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,
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similar points and
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points
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Firstly
, the participants in an
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online
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class
have the same role as those in a virtual one.
In other words
, the teachers
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often
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make
a preparation
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before
teaching in
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,
similarly
, lecturers
also
prepare their slides and materials in advance.
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have to
fulfill their homework in both
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and offline classes.

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Despite of
the similarity,
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and offline
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noble differences.

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first
one is in communication. It is obvious that in
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classes
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student
has more opportunities to give his speech than in
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online
courses.
For example
, offline-
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students
have more time to discuss with other classmates and interact with their tutors through the gesture, eye contact and
also
body language. Although there may be a requirement for pupils to turn on the camera in
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online
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classes
, there is limitation such as Internet connection and
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students’
willingness, which leads to the lack of interaction in
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learning.

Another obvious difference is that
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is much more flexible compared to
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learning
. While face-to-face
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fixed
timetable consisting of the time to
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start
and
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class
,
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classes
give a chance for learners to choose a suitable time to study.

In conclusion
,
even though
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is
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from
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in flexibility and opportunities to communicate, they are similar in the role of
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people
joining in.
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IELTS essay Show the similarities and/or differences between online learning and traditional learning

Essay
  American English
6 paragraphs
258 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.0
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