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Show some steps to protect endangered animals

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As we know, animals play an important role in our environment. They help maintain biodiversity in nature. But today, many animal species are in danger of extinction. And in this paragraph I will discuss some measures of protecting endangered animals. Firstly, people ought to protect the habitats of animals. It is the most important condition because if their habitat were polluted too much, they couldn’t survive. Secondly, we can create the natural national park to protect them from hunter and bad condition. In the national park, animals can live well and people can visit to see them. Actually, animals sometime need getting back to the nature where they can be themselves. Last but not least, we should educate people from a young age about the importance of wild animals in maintaining the ecosystem and biodiversity. In addition, young people should be educated on ways to protect our environment, such as taking out the garbage correctly, caring for animals, and planting trees. In conclusion, I think there are many measures to protect endangered animals and each of us has the responsibility to protect and save endangered species before it is too late.
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animals
play an
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role in our environment. They
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help
maintain biodiversity in nature.
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today
,
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many
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animal
species are in
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danger
of extinction. And in this paragraph I will discuss
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some
measures of protecting endangered
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animals
.
Firstly
,
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people
ought to
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protect
the habitats of
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animals
. It is the most
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important
condition
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because
if their habitat
were polluted
too much, they couldn’t survive.
Secondly
, we can create the natural national park to
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protect
them from hunter and
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bad
condition. In the national park,
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animals
can
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live
well and
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people
can visit to
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see
them. Actually,
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animals
sometime need getting back to the nature where they can be themselves. Last
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but
not least, we should educate
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people
from a young age about the importance of wild
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animals
in maintaining the ecosystem and biodiversity.
In addition
, young
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people
should
be educated
on ways to
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protect
our environment, such as taking out the garbage
correctly
, caring for
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animals
, and planting trees.
In conclusion
, I
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think
there are
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many
measures to
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protect
endangered
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animals
and each of us has the responsibility to
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protect
and save endangered species
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before
it is too late.
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IELTS essay Show some steps to protect endangered animals

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
191 words
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.0
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