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Show how watching a movie in a cinema can be different from watching a movie at home.

Show how watching a movie in a cinema can be different from watching a movie at home. BL1D5
It is true that there are some differences between watching movies in theaters and watching them at home. As far as I know, this situation occurs due to many differences in space and quality. Now I will explain clearly. It can be said that this situation can be caused by a number of main reasons. One of them is the difference in quality when we watch movies in two places. At the cinema, we experience the feeling of watching on the big monitor, creating a real feeling like being lost in the world of the movie. Another factor leading to the difference from the cinema that is the wide monitor with 4D quality will create a clear view, helping us easily pay attention to the movie. One of the outstanding reasons related to the difference of cinema is the human factor around. At the cinema, there are many seats for many people, so in addition to the person accompanying us, we're also watching a movie with everyone, we can scream the whole hall when faced with a horror situation, or cry when seeing touching situations. All bring more excitement to the viewers, as well as increase the attractiveness of the film. Nevertheless, while watching movies in the house, the screen quality is quite small and not very realistic, we can only see on the small screen, sometimes it has a transmission error. It makes us noisy and loses interest while watching. Moreover, there is a difference in movie content, most movies on TV are just TV series, while in theaters all are famous movies that have just been released. All of this says that watching movies at home is less enjoyable than at the cinema. In conclusion, there are some differences between watching a movie in a cinema and watching a movie at home. Therefore, I hope a large screen TV with an affordable price will be released soon in the future
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, we experience the feeling of watching on the
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big
monitor, creating a real feeling like
being lost
in the world of the
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movie
. Another factor leading to the
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difference
from the
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cinema
that is
the wide monitor with 4D
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quality
will create a
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clear
view, helping us
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is the human factor around. At the
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with everyone, we can scream the whole hall when faced with a horror
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, or cry when seeing touching
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. All bring more excitement to the viewers,
as well
as increase the attractiveness of the film.

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, while watching
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content, most
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TV series, while in theaters all are
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movies
at home is less enjoyable than at the cinema.

In conclusion
, there are
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and watching a
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IELTS essay Show how watching a movie in a cinema can be different from watching a movie at home.

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
321 words
6.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 7.0
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