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Should uniforms be required at school?

Should uniforms be required at school? WELjq
Nowadays, students' attires for school have been concerned by both parents and children. Many think that casual clothes are more comfortable for students. However, school uniforms should be required because of the benefits below. First, uniforms create a sense of equality for the students in the learning institutions. Because not all students are privileged or come from wealthy families, wearing uniforms will make social status no longer be an issue. It also reduces the worries of students who face low self-esteem. Additionally, the rate of bullying has significantly decreased as there are fewer differences amongst students. By wearing school uniforms, all students will appear the same. Thus, equality between classes will be sustained. Second, school uniforms help save parents' money. In today's life, parents have to deal with lots of financial issues, and one of them is children's needs for clothes. If there are no uniforms, children will have to wear their costumes to school. Consequently, their demands for different and fashionable clothes - which are costly and sometimes unaffordable - will rise. However, school uniforms will be a solution to this problem since they can be purchased once a year and be worn all through the year. As a result, it can reduce families' financial burdens. Wearing school uniforms also encourages discipline in school. It makes people follow a common standard and not think of wearing something different or going against the majority. Also, it is a constant reminder to the students of where they are, making them pause and think of the consequences before doing impulsive actions that may affect the school's image. In these cases, uniforms have improved students' behavior and self-restraint.
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create a sense of equality for the
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in the learning institutions.
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are privileged
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come
from wealthy families, wearing
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make
social status no longer be an issue. It
also
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reduces
the worries of
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students
who face low self-esteem.
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, the rate of bullying has
significantly
decreased as there are fewer differences amongst
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students
. By wearing
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, all
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will appear the same.
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, equality between classes will
be sustained
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save parents' money. In
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deal with lots of financial issues, and one of them is children's needs for clothes. If there are no
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, children will
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have to
wear their costumes to
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school
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Consequently
, their demands for
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different
and fashionable clothes
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which are costly and
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will be a solution to this problem since they can be
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purchased
once a year and
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all through the year.
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reduce
families' financial burdens.

Wearing
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also
encourages discipline in
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. It
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makes
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people
follow a common standard and not
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think
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different
or going against the majority.
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, it is a constant reminder to the
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of where they are, making them pause and
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think
of the consequences
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before
doing impulsive actions that may affect the school's image. In these cases,
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have
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improved
students' behavior and self-restraint.
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IELTS essay Should uniforms be required at school?

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4 paragraphs
275 words
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