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should the international community do more to tackle the threat of global warming

global warming is recoganised a serious problem around the world by climates scienties. the international authorities trying to prevent the causes of global warming around the world. but the problem is not extreamly finished, so the government should make some advanced authorities to prevent from causes of global warming. global warming contains several kinds of cons. To begun with, the manufactured industries are the majors causes to have the air pollution, with air pollution the death rate of individuals having breathing problems had been increasing very fast. cutting trees also a big issues in international countries
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around the world.
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advanced authorities to
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.
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global
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contains several kinds of cons. To begun with, the manufactured industries are the majors causes to have the air pollution, with air pollution the death rate of individuals having breathing problems had been increasing
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IELTS essay should the international community do more to tackle the threat of global warming

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
95 words
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4.0
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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