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It is sometimes argued that spend too much time on studying subjects can lead to lack of experience. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

It is sometimes argued that spend too much time on studying subjects can lead to lack of experience. rb57k
It is sometimes argued that spend too much time on studying subjects can lead to lack of experience. I totally agree with this opinion and trust that practice also so important in our knowledge First of all, I believe that you will not be able to get a job, since many people are searching for job with their unpractised knowledge. For example, researchers discovered that most unemployed people hadn't practised enough during their study. Therefore it is necessary to practise while studying. Secondly practising helps to revise your education and explore new capabilities. Within experiment learned items can be seen in real life and everyone is capable of seeing new things which are not written in books To conclude. learning subjects is significant while practising also plays a vital role in our career
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a job, since
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knowledge.
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, researchers discovered that most unemployed
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people
hadn't
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practised
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during their study.
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Therefore
it is necessary to
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practise
while studying.
Secondly
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practising
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helps
to revise your education and explore new capabilities. Within experiment learned items can be
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seen
in real life and everyone is capable of seeing new things which are not written in books
To conclude
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learning
subjects is significant while
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practising
also
plays a vital role in our
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career
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IELTS essay It is sometimes argued that spend too much time on studying subjects can lead to lack of experience.

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  American English
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132 words
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