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Should schools require students to wear uniforms everyday?

Should schools require students to wear uniforms everyday? 7Lrr3
Nowadays, wearing uniform is considered a responsibility For me, uniforms are necessary for students. First of all, if students do not wear uniforms they will certainly waste a lot of time thinking about what they're going to wear to be more fashionable, but if they do, they will always know what they going to wear. Therefore, it saves more time to do other activities, such as making a delicious breakfast, revising the lesson, or. . students. besides that, uniforms make students have more responsible for what they do outside of school. This is because they will know what they should do in order not to make the school lose face.
Nowadays, wearing
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is considered
a responsibility For me,
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uniforms
are necessary for
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students
.
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First of all
, if
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do not wear
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uniforms
they will
certainly
waste
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a lot of
time thinking about what they're going to wear to be more fashionable,
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if they do, they will always know what
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they going
to wear.
Therefore
, it saves more time to do other activities, such as making a delicious breakfast, revising the lesson, or.
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students
.
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besides
that,
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uniforms
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make
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students
have more responsible for what they do outside of school. This is
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because
they will know what they should do in order not to
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the school lose face.

IELTS essay Should schools require students to wear uniforms everyday?

Essay
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1 paragraphs
110 words
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