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Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Always telling the truth is the most important consideration in any relationship. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer. Be sure to use your own words. Do not use memorized examples.

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There are certain considerations or factors that everyone takes into account in a relationship. People may look for honesty, altruism, understanding, loyalty, being thoughtful etc! Everyone would more or less wish that the person s/he is dealing with, has some of these virtues above. Putting them in an order according to their importance, however can be very subjective and relative. When someone asks him/herself the question "What do I consider to be the most important thing in my relationship? " the answer depends on a lot of factors such as how his/her earlier relationships were. After stating that everyone's opinion can be different about this, for me honesty, in other words, always telling the truth is the most important consideration in a relationship. Opposite of this is inarguably lying and if someone needs to lie, either s/he is hiding something or is afraid of telling me something. In any relationship of mine, I would wish that first of all, the person I'm dealing with is honest. Even though s/he thinks that s/he did something wrong that I wouldn't like, s/he'd better tell me the truth and not lie about it. Later on if I find out about a lie or hear the truth from someone else, that'd be much more unpleasant. In that case how can I ever believe or trust that person again? How can I ever believe that this person has enough confidence in me to forgive him/her and carry on with the relationship from there. So if I cannot trust a person anymore, if the person doesn't think I can handle the truth, there's no point to continuing that relationship. Although I would like to see altruistic, understanding, thoughtful and loyal behavior from people, an instance of_ the opposite of these behaviors would not upset me as much as dishonesty would. Among all the possible behaviors, dishonesty is the only one for me that terminates how I feel about a person's reliability. Therefore honesty would be my first concern and the most important consideration in a relationship.
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thoughtful etc! Everyone would more or less wish that the
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person
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with, has
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some
of these virtues above. Putting them in an order according to their

importance,
however
can be
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subjective and relative.

When someone asks him/herself the question
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What do I consider to be the

most
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important
thing in my
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relationship
?
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the
answer depends on
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a lot of
factors

such as how his/her earlier
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relationships
were.

After stating that everyone's opinion can be
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different
about this, for me honesty,

in other words
, always telling the
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truth
is the most
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important
consideration

in a
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relationship
. Opposite of this is
inarguably
lying and if someone needs to lie,

either
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s/he
is hiding something or is afraid of telling me something.

In any
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relationship
of mine, I would wish that
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first of all
, the
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person
I'm dealing

with is honest.
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s/he
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thinks
that
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did something
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wrong
that I

wouldn't like, s/he'd better
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tell
me the
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truth
and not lie about it. Later on if I find out

about a lie or hear the
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truth
from someone else, that'd be much more unpleasant. In

that case how can I ever believe or trust that
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person
again? How can I ever believe

that this
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person
has
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enough
confidence in me to forgive him/her and carry on with

the
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relationship
from there.
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if I cannot trust a
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person
anymore, if the person

doesn't
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think
I can handle the
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truth
, there's no point to continuing that relationship.

Although I would like to
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see
altruistic, understanding, thoughtful and loyal behavior from
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people
, an instance of_ the opposite of these behaviors would not

upset me as much as dishonesty would. Among all the possible behaviors, dishonesty

is the
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only
one for me that terminates how I feel about a person's reliability.

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Therefore
honesty would be my
first
concern and the most
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important
consideration

in a
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relationship
.
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IELTS essay Always telling the truth is the most important consideration in any relationship. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer. Be sure to use your own words. Do not use memorized examples.

Essay
  American English
8 paragraphs
340 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
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Task Achievement: 6.0
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    Present relevant ideas
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