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Should schools lend textbooks

Should schools lend textbooks DNNEA
Some schools insist that students buy the textbooks instead of lending them books. First, Lending books can help a lot of parents and children save their money, second, it helps them find all of the books they need easily, since school is already lending them the books. On the other hand, if the school wouldn’t lend the students their textbooks, they will have to buy the textbooks on themselves, this actively demonstrates that they will need to have their own responsibility. Also, it would help the school save money for other educational things
Some
schools
insist that students
buy
the textbooks
instead
of lending them books.

First
, Lending books can
help
a lot of
parents and children save their money, second, it
helps
them find
all of the
books they need
easily
, since
school
is already lending them the books.

On the other hand
, if the
school
wouldn’t lend the students their textbooks, they will
have to
buy
the textbooks on themselves, this
actively
demonstrates that they will need to have their
own
responsibility.
Also
, it would
help
the
school
save money for other educational things
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IELTS essay Should schools lend textbooks

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