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Should schools lend textbooks

Should schools lend textbooks DNNEA

Some schools insist that students buy the textbooks instead of lending them books. First, Lending books can help a lot of parents and children save their money, second, it helps them find all of the books they need easily, since school is already lending them the books. On the other hand, if the school wouldn’t lend the students their textbooks, they will have to buy the textbooks on themselves, this actively demonstrates that they will need to have their own responsibility. Also, it would help the school save money for other educational things

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IELTS essay Should schools lend textbooks

Essay

American English

3 paragraphs

92 words

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4.0

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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5

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Grammatical Range: 6.0

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Task Achievement: 6.0

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