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should put limits on the ınternet

should put limits on the ınternet BgJE9

Nowadays, all we are aware of the increasing the average of using Internet all around the World. Whether if it is right or not, this is the status that have been clear, approved and not ignorable. In this case, we should explain the advantages and disadvantages clearly. Then we should make a decision to if the students need to be limited for accessing to the Internet. To clarify, There are benefits which should be mentioned here such as being able to access any information any time we want or making our life easier. Additionally, all we need to do some stuff via the Internet without getting tired or going any where. This sounds like one of the most luxury thing we have in our lifes. Also, having categorized datas and not losing any time to find what we look for is plumb of the Internet. On another hand, The disadvantegous of the Internet must be considered besides the benefits. Firstly, we can get started to order by the most compliament stuff with considering “spending plenty of time on the Internet”, even though we are not making anything useful during this time. Furthermore, Social media seems like the one which takes most of those leisure time on the phone. Even if the social media has good sides to be talked here, but I am pretty sure that we have more things to say about its bad sides such as spending our time to just look others, comparing our life and them, being upset and not being able to spend our this time more beneficial. Although the disadvantages of the Internet, we have to consider the independence of people because of that we should not put limit to students about accessing to the Internet but this doesn’t mean you shouldn’t check and control them, you should do that for their security and safe.

Nowadays, all we are aware of the increasing the average of using Internet all around the World. Whether if it is right or not, this is the status that have been This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :apparent
clear
, approved and not ignorable. In this case
, we should This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :interpret
explain
 the advantages and disadvantages clearly
. Then we should This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :createconstructmanufactureproduce
make
 a decision to if the students need to be limited
 for accessing to the Internet.

To clarify, There are benefits which should be mentioned
 here such as being able to access any information any You use this word too often, consider replacing it withpointgenerationpastsecondturnspace
time
 we want or making our life easier. Additionally
, all we need to do This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
 stuff via the Internet without getting tired or going Did you mean "anywhere"?anywhere
any where
. This sounds like one of the most luxury thing we have in our Possible spelling mistake. Did you mean "lives", the plural form of the noun 'life'?liveslifelieslineslightslikes
lifes
. Also
, having categorized Possible spelling mistake found.datadatesDATAR
datas
 and not losing any You use this word too often, consider replacing it withpointgenerationpastsecondturnspace
time
 to find what we look for is plumb of the Internet.

On another hand, The Possible spelling mistake found.disadvantageous
disadvantegous
 of the Internet This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :require
must
be considered
besides
 the benefits. Firstly
, we can This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquire
get
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :initiated
started
 to order by the most Possible spelling mistake found.compliment
compliament
 stuff with considering “spending This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:abundance
plenty
 of You use this word too often, consider replacing it withpointgenerationpastsecondturnspace
time
 on the Internet”, even though
 we are not making anything useful during this You use this word too often, consider replacing it withpointgenerationpastsecondturnspace
time
. Furthermore
, Social media seems like the one which takes most of those leisure You use this word too often, consider replacing it withpointgenerationpastsecondturnspace
time
 on the phone. Even if the social media has This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :beneficialproduct
good
 sides to be talked
 here, This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
 I am pretty sure that we have more things to say about its This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :evil
bad
 sides such as spending our You use this word too often, consider replacing it withpointgenerationpastsecondturnspace
time
 to This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:merely
just
 look others, comparing our life and them, being upset
 and not being able to spend our this You use this word too often, consider replacing it withpointgenerationpastsecondturnspace
time
 more beneficial.

Although the disadvantages of the Internet, we This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:ought to
have to
 consider the independence of This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualsnationsociety
people
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:due to the factin light of the fact thatowing to the fact that
because
 of that we should not put limit to students about accessing to the Internet This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
 this doesn’t mean you shouldn’t This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :monitor
check
 and control them, you should do that for their security and safe. 