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Should people living in big cities be encouraged to use public transport?

Should people living in big cities be encouraged to use public transport? Klp60
In the world, there are many choices of transport for people's daily needs. Currently, many cities develop many beautiful and new motorbikes and cars, so that each individual can be proactive about his time and purpose. However, the problem of traffic accidents dominates the development of large cities. To solve these problems, governments have created organizations to raise awareness about traffic safety and the efficiency of using public transport. Personally, I completely agree with this view. First, the awareness of traffic safety is extremely important for each individual. As we all know, the familiar internal public transport in countries around the world today is the bus, or the subway, the tram, etc. However, some people think that the bus itself is the cause. leading to traffic jams because of its bulkiness. According to the Litman study (2016), people who live or work in transit-oriented communities tend to drive less than their annual mileage, drive at a lower speed, and have fewer commuting options. Better yet, it allows them to avoid high-risk driving, such as after drinking or when sick. Second, the effectiveness of using public transport in solving traffic problems is extremely effective. According to information from the means of transport in Vietnam, on average, each citizen has at least one means of transport. In which the most rudimentary means of transport are bicycles, occupying 1 square meter, motorbikes, occupying 1. 5 square meters, and cars, occupying 5. 5 square meters. Buses occupy 28. 75 square meters with a capacity of 17-20 people. We know the highway in the middle of the city. It is 12 meters in Ho Chi Minh City, 25 meters on national highways or highways. In just a few practical examples, we can see the advantages of using public transport to reduce pressure on the transport network. In addition, it is clear that the use of public transport also solves environmental problems such as carbon emissions, as well as the cost of gasoline and social resources. In summary, the government should have campaigns, organize propaganda to encourage people to use public means, and continuously update and improve technical systems and infrastructure for public vehicles. Plus, it is the right thing to do to encourage people to use them. In my opinion, the use of public transport is something that should be encouraged to remove barriers to the country's economy and social development. A developed country needs to effectively use resources, the time, health and spirit of each individual in the community.
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choices of
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transport
for
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people
's daily needs.
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,
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many
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cities
develop
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many
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beautiful
and new motorbikes and cars,
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so
that each individual can be proactive about his time and purpose.
However
, the
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problem
of
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traffic
accidents dominates the development of large
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cities
. To solve these
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problems
,
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governments
have created organizations to raise awareness about
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traffic
safety and the efficiency of using
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public
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transport
.
Personally
, I completely
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agree
with this view.

First
, the awareness of
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traffic
safety is
extremely
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important
for each individual. As we all know, the familiar internal
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public
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transport
in countries around the world
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today
is the bus, or the subway, the tram, etc.
However
,
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some
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people
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think
that the bus itself is the cause.
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leading
to
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traffic
jams
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because
of its bulkiness. According to the
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Litman
study (2016),
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people
who
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live
or work in transit-oriented communities tend to drive less than their annual mileage, drive at a lower speed, and have fewer commuting options. Better
yet
, it
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allows
them to avoid high-
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risk
driving, such as after drinking or when sick.

Second, the effectiveness of using
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public
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transport
in solving
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traffic
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problems
is
extremely
effective. According to information from the
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means
of
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transport
in Vietnam, on average, each citizen has at least one
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means
of
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transport
. In which the most rudimentary
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means
of
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transport
are bicycles, occupying 1 square
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meter
, motorbikes, occupying 1. 5 square
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meters
, and cars, occupying 5. 5 square
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meters
. Buses occupy 28. 75 square
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meters
with a capacity of 17-20
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people
. We know the highway in the middle of the city. It is 12
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meters
in Ho Chi Minh City, 25
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meters
on national highways or highways. In
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just
a few practical examples, we can
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see
the advantages of using
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public
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transport
to
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reduce
pressure on the
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transport
network.
In addition
, it is
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clear
that the
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use
of
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public
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also
solves environmental
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problems
such as carbon emissions,
as well
as the cost of gasoline and social resources.

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In
summary, the
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government
should have campaigns, organize propaganda to encourage
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people
to
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use
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public
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means
, and
continuously
update and
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improve
technical systems and infrastructure for
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public
vehicles. Plus, it is the right thing to do to encourage
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people
to
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use
them. In my opinion, the
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use
of
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public
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transport
is something that should
be encouraged
to remove barriers to the country's economy and social development. A
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developed country
needs to
effectively
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use
resources, the time, health and spirit of each individual in the community.
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IELTS essay Should people living in big cities be encouraged to use public transport?

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415 words
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