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Should people hunting animal?

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Although hunting is now considered an unethical and illegal practice, it also offers certain benefits. Firstly, Hunting can help you to improve your fitness. In fact, hunters often walk quite long distances until they find the right hunting spot such as hike into wooded areas, setup a stand, camp, and endure sometimes difficult conditions. It is a way to get personal exercise, especially since dietary options are limited while hunting. Secondly, It increases a person’s knowledge about Mother Nature. To be a successful hunter, it is necessary to learn about the outdoors. You must be able to recognize animal trails and habits. You should know how to track animals in case one gets away from you. Furthermore, Hunting is a way to maintain control of the local wildlife population
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walk quite long distances until they find the right
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spot such as hike into wooded areas,
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a stand, camp, and endure
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difficult conditions. It is a way to
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personal exercise,
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since dietary options
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Secondly
, It increases a person’s knowledge about Mother Nature. To be a successful hunter, it is necessary to learn about the outdoors. You
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be able to recognize animal trails and habits. You should know how to
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animals in case one
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Furthermore
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is a way to maintain control of the local wildlife population
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IELTS essay Should people hunting animal?

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