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Should parents teach their children about technology?

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IELTS essay Should parents teach their children about technology?

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
232 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
and less than 150 words in Task 1
4.0
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.0
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Grammatical Range: 5.5
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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