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Should parents decide their children’s career in the future?

Should parents decide their children’s career in the future? Jqdk0
First, parents need to respect their children's decisions because each person has their own hobby. If children follow a career path chosen by their parents and which is not of their interest, they will dishearten easily. When challenges come, they will have no motivation to overcome. However, if children choose their own career path, they are going to be in charge of their decision even something goes wrong. Moreover, they will think about how to deal with it instead of blaming their parents. For example, Thiago, which is known as Lionel Messi’s son, doesn’t like football. He has no passion for football like his father and Messi respects it. He never forces Thiago to be a football player. Second, children have the right to choose what they want to be or want to achieve in the future. Every child has their dream career, and it is up to them whether they want to follow their careers or not. In some families, children are pushed to follow the goals their parents set for them. When they fail, they can’t meet their parents’ expectations.
First
,
parents
need to respect their children's decisions
because
each person has their
own
hobby. If
children
follow a
career
path chosen by their
parents
and which is not of their interest, they will dishearten
easily
. When challenges
come
, they will have no motivation to overcome.
However
, if
children
choose their
own
career
path, they are going to be in charge of their decision even something goes
wrong
.
Moreover
, they will
think
about how to deal with it
instead
of blaming their
parents
.
For example
,
Thiago
, which
is known
as Lionel Messi’s son, doesn’t like football. He has no passion for football like his father and Messi respects it. He never forces
Thiago
to be a football player. Second,
children
have the right to choose what they want to be or want to achieve in the future. Every child has
their
dream
career
, and it is up to them whether they want to follow their
careers
or not. In
some
families,
children
are pushed
to follow the goals their
parents
set for them. When they fail, they can’t
meet
their
parents’
expectations.
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IELTS essay Should parents decide their children’s career in the future?

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