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My favorite food my favorite food

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I want to say that I m not a picky eter and I can eat ike the whole universe. but If i had to choose I would choose braised fish made by my mom. This is a dish that I love to eat when it's raining, sitting together with a bowl of hot rice, a braised fish induding fish, garlic, chili, peppers and more improtantly, my mom's hand. The food is very healthy because fish digest. I especially like this becouse my mom suggested it and the broth makes a difference. My mom has her recipe and pipping sause makes the dish taste different
I want to say that
I m
not a picky
eter
and I can eat
ike
the whole universe.
but
If
i
had to choose I would choose braised fish made by my mom. This is a dish that I
love
to eat when it's raining, sitting together with a bowl of hot rice, a braised fish
induding
fish, garlic, chili, peppers and more
improtantly
, my mom's hand. The food is
very
healthy
because
fish digest. I
especially
like this
becouse
my mom suggested it and the broth
makes
a difference. My mom has her recipe and pipping
sause
makes
the dish taste
different
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IELTS essay My favorite food my favorite food

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
103 words
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.0
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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