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My favorite food my favorite food

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I want to say that I m not a picky eter and I can eat ike the whole universe. but If i had to choose I would choose braised fish made by my mom. This is a dish that I love to eat when it's raining, sitting together with a bowl of hot rice, a braised fish induding fish, garlic, chili, peppers and more improtantly, my mom's hand. The food is very healthy because fish digest. I especially like this becouse my mom suggested it and the broth makes a difference. My mom has her recipe and pipping sause makes the dish taste different

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 like this Possible spelling mistake found.because
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 my mom suggested it and the broth This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :createsconstructsmanufacturesproduces
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IELTS essay My favorite food my favorite food

Essay

American English

1 paragraphs

103 words

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4.0

Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5

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One main idea per paragraph
Include an introduction and conclusion
Support main points with an explanation and then an example
Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Vary your linking phrases using synonyms

Lexical Resource: 5.5

Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
Check your writing for errors

Task Achievement: 5.0

Answer all parts of the question
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Present relevant ideas
Fully explain these ideas
Support ideas with relevant, specific examples

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