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I have been studying at TDTU for three months. Because My family is poor, so I entered school later than my classmates. To catch up with my classmate, I copied out my friend's notebook and summed up the man points after each lesson while I was studying, I usually jot down everything I thought that useful because I called behind in my class, so some of my classmates aren't into me. They often played up when taking a rest. Sometimes, they cross out my notebook. It made me intend to Drop out to changed school. After all, I managed to scrape through anything
I have been studying at
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TDTU
for three months.
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Because
My family is poor,
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so
I entered school later than my classmates. To catch up with my classmate, I copied out my friend's notebook and summed up the
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man
points after each lesson while I was studying, I
usually
jot down everything I
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thought
that useful
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because
I called behind in my
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class
,
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so
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some
of my classmates aren't into me. They
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often
played up when taking a rest.
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Sometimes
, they cross out my notebook. It made me intend to Drop out to
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changed
school.
After all
, I managed to scrape through
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IELTS essay memorable memories in your life

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
102 words
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4.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 6.0
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Grammatical Range: 6.0
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Task Achievement: 5.5
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