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In an entrance exams to high schools besides math and literature, candidates are required to answer test questions about other subjects like physics, chemestry, history, geography and civic education. What is your opinion about this way of testing?

In an entrance exams to high schools besides math and literature, candidates are required to answer test questions about other subjects like physics, chemestry, history, geography and civic education. What is your opinion about this way of testing? wM5Am
In an entrance exams to high schools, apart from math and literarure are obligatory subjects, candidates also have to take an examination about other subjects such as physics, chemestry, history…This way of testing has both pros and cons. On the one hand, if students examined other subjects with math and literature, they would advoid deviation in learning. In the past, secondary students in Vietnam only focused on two main subjects like math and literature and they had a tendency to leave out other subjects which are not crucial for entrance or learnt in improperly way. In the day and age, students are taught all of the basic knowledge about each subjects by their teachers not only math and literature and when they have an examination, students must assure to have a thorough grasp of fudanmental knowledge about sub subjects. Learning physics, chemestry, history, geography, civic education you will provide a life skills or widen more acknowledge. For instance, since 2018, Ha Noi department of education and training decide that students beside doing math, literature and english test, they must complete fourth subjects which is required. Therefore, it will create a balance between sub subjects and main subjects. On the other hand, the testing process might have arduous. It is believed that everybody cannot be outstanding at all subjects, so making students to cram a bunch of knowledge is nearly impossible. Moreover, after class, students may go to extra classes or participate in sports club so they do not have much time to study all of the subjects while having a lot of task assigments to do. For example, students who have a expection to join in specialize schools, they must stay focus on specialized subjects and they can’t spend time learning all sub subjects especially in the last months. It’s very heavy pressure and more stressful for them. To sum up, this way of testing has advantages and disadvantages; therefore, students should adapt the pressure in studying to pass the entrance as they aspire. From my perspective, students ought to balance all of the subjects in order not to meet a diffuculty thorough their studying.
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literarure
are obligatory
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, candidates
also
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take an examination about
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other
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subjects
such as physics,
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chemestry
, history…
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way of testing has both pros and cons.

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students
examined
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other
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subjects
with
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and
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literature
, they would
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advoid
deviation in learning. In the past, secondary
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students
in Vietnam
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only
focused on two main
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subjects
like
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math
and
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literature and
they had a tendency to
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leave
out
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other
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subjects
which are not crucial for entrance or
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learnt
in
improperly
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students
are taught
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all of the
basic knowledge about each
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subjects
by their teachers not
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only
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math
and
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literature
and when they have an examination,
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must
assure to have a thorough grasp of
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fudanmental
knowledge about sub
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subjects
. Learning physics,
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chemestry
, history, geography, civic education you will provide a life
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skills
or widen more acknowledge.
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Noi
department of education and training decide that
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beside doing
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,
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literature
and
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english
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test
, they
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complete fourth
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subjects
which
is required
.
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, it will create a balance between sub
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subjects
and main subjects.

On the
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hand, the testing process might have arduous. It
is believed
that everybody cannot be outstanding at all
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subjects
,
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making
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students
to cram a bunch of knowledge is
nearly
impossible.
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, after
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,
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may go to extra classes or participate in sports club
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so
they do not have much time to study
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all of the
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while having
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assigments
to do.
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,
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to
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join
in specialize schools, they
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stay focus on specialized
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subjects and
they can’t spend time learning all sub
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especially
in the last months. It’s
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heavy pressure and more stressful for them.

To sum up, this way of testing has advantages and disadvantages;
therefore
,
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students
should adapt the pressure in studying to pass the entrance as they aspire. From my perspective,
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students
ought to balance
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all of the
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subjects
in order not to
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meet
a
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diffuculty
thorough their studying.
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IELTS essay In an entrance exams to high schools besides math and literature, candidates are required to answer test questions about other subjects like physics, chemestry, history, geography and civic education. What is your opinion about this way of testing?

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  American English
4 paragraphs
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