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some people believe that with all the troubles in the world today, money spent on space exploration is complete waste of resources do you agree or disagree

some people believe that with all the troubles in the world today, money spent on space exploration is complete waste of resources kYW7e
Extravagence spending on space research on out of space research is often considered a bad investment mainly because of a fact that there are multiple rconcerns on this planet. I completely agree with this notion. This eassay will explore how world resources could be used for the reduction poverty, provision of medical facilities and reduction of chronic food shortages, rather than spending uncertain games. Firstly, poverty is the biggest challenge of the 21st century with millions odf living under poverty line without the basic necessity of life. This problem can be evadicated by relocating the funding from space research. For example, a report published in north ameria revealed that trillians of dollars invested by the US alon were enough to take billions out of poverty. Thus, priority should be given to helping humanity on earth rather than spending on space research programs. Secondly, lack of medical facilities is another great concern that the world is facing. Reason being the inappropriate use of financial resources. In many parts of the world people died with a cureable diseases, the funding being wrongly assign to space programes can protect people form dying unnecessary. For instance, the high infant mortality ratio in Africa will easily curtailed with around half of the money spend on space programs bt Russia, US and China. Hence saving lives is far-more far more superior program then any space program. Finally, chronic food shortages around the world need urgent attention as well. With famin and drought millions of people die because of extreme hunger. The money from space exploration can be used to curb this problem forever. Therefore, the investment from the space programs can be redirected to helping humaity on earth. To sumup, with all the problems to griping the humanity. The lavish sum of money spent on space does not seems justified a more appropriate use would be to spent it on reduction of poverty, provision of medical facilities and to overcome shortage of food.
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rconcerns
on this planet. I completely
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agree
with this notion. This
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eassay
will explore how
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world
resources could be
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used
for the reduction
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poverty
, provision of medical facilities and reduction of chronic food shortages,
rather
than spending uncertain games.

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,
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poverty
is the biggest challenge of the 21st century with millions
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odf
living under
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poverty
line without the basic necessity of life. This problem can be
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evadicated
by relocating the funding from
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space
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research
.
For example
, a report published in north
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ameria
revealed that
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trillians
of dollars invested by the US
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alon
were
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enough
to take billions out of
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poverty
.
Thus
, priority should be
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given
to helping humanity on earth
rather
than spending on
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space
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research
programs.

Secondly
, lack of medical facilities is another great concern that the
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world
is facing. Reason being the inappropriate
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use
of financial resources. In
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many
parts of the
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world
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people
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died
with a
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cureable
diseases, the funding being
wrongly
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assign
to
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can protect
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people
form dying unnecessary.
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, the high infant mortality ratio in Africa will
easily
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with around half of the money spend on
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programs
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Russia, US and China.
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lives
is far-more far more superior
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program
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then
any
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program.

Finally
, chronic food shortages around the
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world
need urgent attention
as well
. With
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famin
and drought millions of
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people
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die
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because
of extreme hunger. The money from
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exploration can be
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used
to curb this problem forever.
Therefore
, the investment from the
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programs
can
be redirected
to helping
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humaity
on earth.

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sumup
, with all the problems to griping the humanity. The lavish sum of money spent on
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does not
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justified a more appropriate
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use
would be to spent it on reduction of
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poverty
, provision of medical facilities and to overcome shortage of food.
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IELTS essay some people believe that with all the troubles in the world today, money spent on space exploration is complete waste of resources

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  American English
5 paragraphs
327 words
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