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Should government spent money on eduction?

Should government spent money on eduction? bbMEB
In our life education is very importamt every person. because not any work without eductaion. i agree this statment government should spent some ammount of money in education. To begin with, in which our country are many schools. some schol are government schools and some are private. private schools give good and their are so may rules but Governmnet schools are not provide good study and they are not so hifi. Moreover, if a person is educated then they do anything. without education we do not go for any place because their places has many differrent language and different Tradinationl. In culcusion, i think government should spent money to education because childern are futute of our country
In our life
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education
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very
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importamt
every person.
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because
not any work without
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eductaion
.
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i
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agree
this
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statment
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should
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spent
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some
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ammount
of money in
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education
. To
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begin
with, in which our country
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are
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many
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schools
.
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some
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schol
are
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government
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schools
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some
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private
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schools
give
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good
and
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rules
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Governmnet
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schools
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provide
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good
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study and
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hifi
.
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, if a person
is educated
then they do anything.
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without
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education we
do not go for any place
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because
their places has
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many
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differrent
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different
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Tradinationl
. In
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culcusion
,
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government
should
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spent
money to
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education
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childern
are
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futute
of our
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country

IELTS essay Should government spent money on eduction?

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
116 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
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4.0
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 5.5
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