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Should employees be required to wear suits in the workplace, or should they wear casual clothes?

Should employees be required to wear suits in the workplace, or should they wear casual clothes? W2BK

I think it is better to employees wear suits in their workplace due for several reasons. Firstly, it seems more professional when they wear formal uniforms. So, the company's clients feel more confident incorporate with the company. Furthermore, they can easily be distinguished among other customers. secondly, I believe that the clothes you wear orient your behavior. Definitely, your behavior depends on your personality but whenever you dressed formally you never let yourself behave rudely. According to new investigations of psychologists, it has proved that a person's clothes, change his actions unconsciously.

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 it is better to employees wear suits in their workplace due for several reasons.

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IELTS essay Should employees be required to wear suits in the workplace, or should they wear casual clothes?

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